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I'm a middle school student name Li Ming．I'm writing to tell you something．Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school．I went there too in the other day．I was surprising to see many students playing computer games，watching films or chat． Some students are even talking about love affairs online．On my opinion，the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find much useful informations．The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than ∧place for games．The Internet is good if we make good use of them．Otherwise，it will do us great harm．So the local government should take measures to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively．
详解：
1． name改为named．考查过去分词．通过分析句子结构可知这里需要用一个非谓语动词作后置定语修饰student，与name之间是被动关系，因此用过去分词．
2． 去掉in．考查介词．这里表达"我前几天也去了那里"，the other day为固定短语，在这里做时间状语，意为"前几天"．
3． surprising改为surprised．考查形容词．这里表达"我很吃惊"，因此要用surprised表示"（人）感到吃惊的"．而surprising表示"（物）令人吃惊的"．
4． chat改为chatting．考查现在分词．这句话的意思是"我很惊讶地看到许多学生玩电脑游戏、看电影或聊天．"通过分析句子结构可知这里出现三个并列的现在分词作宾语补足语．
5． are改为were．考查时态．结合上下文可知这里说的是前几天的事情，因此要用一般过去时．
6． on改为in．考查借此及固定搭配．in my opinion是固定短语，意为"依我看来"．
7． which改为where．考查定语从句引导词．这里是一个定语从句，先行词是a place，且从句中缺少地点状语，因此这里用关系代词where来引导该从句．
8． informations改为information．考查名词单复数．名词information是一个不可数名词，因此要把informations改为information．
9． than后面加a．考查冠词．结合语境可知这句话的意思是"互联网应该是通向外部世界的窗口，而不是一个游戏场所．"，因此用不定冠词a表示"一个"．
10． them改为it．考查代词指代．这里用代词it代替前面的the Internet．
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