假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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214362. （2020•长安区一中•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was on Sunday so I didn't have to go to school as usually. My parents went to the countryside to see my grandparents， left me alone. After finishing my homework， I began to play football at home. All of sudden，I kicked the ball so hardly that it flew right onto a vase and broke it. It was a great favorite of my mother's. I decided to tell my parents it was the fault of the cat for fear that she should punish me. Therefore，when they got home， I hesitated for a moment and told them that truly happened. Instead of punishing me，they just hoped that I will never make so a foolish mistake again.

共享时间:2020-11-19 难度:1

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人与自我，

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（1）去掉on（2）usually改为usual（3）left改为leaving （4）of后添加a（5）hardly改为hard（6）should改为might（7）Therefore改为However（8）that改为what （9）will改为would（10）so改为such

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It was on Sunday so I didn't have to go to school as usually. My parents went to the countryside to see my grandparents， left me alone. After finishing my homework， I began to play football at home. All of ∧sudden，I kicked the ball so hardly that it flew right onto a vase and broke it. It was a great favorite of my mother's. I decided to tell my parents it was the fault of the cat for fear that she should punish me. Therefore，when they got home， I hesitated for a moment and told them that truly happened. Instead of punishing me，they just hoped that I will never make so a foolish mistake again.
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（1）去掉on .考查介词。句意：那天是星期天，所以我不必像往常一样去上学。Sunday做be动词的表语，前不用介词，故去掉on。
（2）usually改为usual.考查固定短语。句意：我没有像平常一样去上学。as usual是固定短语"和平常一样"。所以把usually改为usual.
（3）left改为leaving . 考查现在分词。句意：我父母去乡下看爷爷奶奶，留下我一个人。本句已经存在谓语动词went且句中没有连词，故leave为非谓语与逻辑主语构成主谓关系，故用现在分词leaving；或添加连词and，构成并列句。
（4）of后添加a.考查冠词。句意：突然间，我狠狠地踢了一下球，球飞到花瓶上摔碎了。固定短语all of a sudden"突然"，故of后添加冠词a。
（5）hardly改为hard .考查副词。句意：突然，我把球踢得太猛了，球正好飞到花瓶上摔碎了。Kick为动词，需用副词修饰，hard既可以做形容词也可以做副词，表示"猛烈地"，hardly为"几乎不"，故改为hard。
（6）should改为might.考查情态动词。句意：我决定告诉父母这是猫的错，怕她惩罚我。以防妈妈的责备应该是不确定的语气，应该用might"有可能"，所以把should改为might.
（7）Therefore改为However.考查副词。句意：然而，当他们回家的时候，我犹豫了一下，告诉他们这是真的发生了，他们没有惩罚我，只是希望我再也不要犯这样愚蠢的错误。上文提到作者本想撒谎，但是下文还是告诉了父母真相，前后为转折关系，故填however.
（8）that改为what .考查连接词。句意：我犹豫了一会儿，把真实情况告诉了他们。本句为宾语从句，且从句中缺少主语，指事情，故用关系代词what。
（9）will改为would.考查时态。句意：他们只是希望我再也不要犯这样愚蠢的错误。hoped是过去时，所以从句应该用过去将来时，用would，所以把will改为would.
（10）so改为such.考查形容词。句意：他们不惩罚我，只希望我不会再犯这样愚蠢的错误。mistake为名词，应用形容词修饰，故so改为such.

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共享时间:2020-02-13 难度:1 相似度:2

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2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
It was very cold on last Monday morning． I was walking on my way to school when I notice two street cleaners cleaning the street in the cold wind． Saw them working so hard on such a cold morning， I was deeply touching and made up my mind to do something for them．
After arriving at school， our classmates gathered together to discuss when we could do help the street cleaners． Some classmate suggested helping with the cleaning． Some suggested bringing any warm clothes to them while others advised getting some hot food to keep us warm． Finally we both agreed on helping with the cleaning and bringing some hot food to them．

共享时间:2019-07-08 难度:1 相似度:2

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205008. （2022•临潼区•高一下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
To deep students' understanding of the history of the Communist Party of China，our school organizes a visit to the Museum of the Communist Party of China last Tuesday.The selecting League members arrived the museum at 2：00 pm.First，a guide told them anything interesting about the museum.Then，we were shown around the exhibits what displayed the history and spirit of the Communist Party of China.After watching a relevant video，and they returned to school.After a visit，not only did they gain new insights into the history，but also they became more aware of the huge responsibility on their shoulder.

共享时间:2022-07-19 难度:1 相似度:2

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204985. （2022•铁路中学•高二上期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was in Beijing which I attended a ten-days winter camp during the Spring Festival this year.Not only did we visit many place of interest，and we also listened many lectures.How exciting I was when we visited a new sports stadium!It was ten times big than our school.Though everyone said the lectures were boring，but I enjoyed myself.I thought most of the activities ，expanding my knowledge，was wonderful.I do hope that more outdoor activities will be organizing so that we can learn more about Beijing.

共享时间:2022-02-07 难度:1 相似度:2

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