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Paragraph1:ThinkingMomwasright,Edunfollowedherdownthetrail.Theypassedawaterfall,tinyyetclear.ThetricklingofwatermadeEdunfeelbetter.Toheramazement,astheywalkedon,therewasalwayssomethingtolookforinthewetgreenwoods:animaltracks,wildflowers,littlecreeks.SoontheycaughtupwithWill,whoeagerlyshowedthemthephotoshetookoftheFoxsparrowrestingonabranch.Togethertheywenton,strollingpastscratchybushes,climbingovergrayrocksandhikingthroughdwarftrees.Edunloomedabovethoselittletrees,exclaiming,"Look,Mom,I'magiant."Unknowinglytheyhadalreadydonemostoftheclimb.
Paragraph2:Twentyminuteslater,theysawthecabin.EdunandWillstartedracingupthehill.Finally,theretheywereinthesmallbutcozysabin.Throughitswindow,Edunsawfarawaymeadowsandlakes,andmanymoremountains,awholenewworldemergingbeforehereyes.Thatnight,everybodystayeduplatetoseethestars.Somanystarsclusteringupthere,Edunproposed,"Ineedtotakeapictureofthem.""Click!"Thecamerafrozethemoment.Radiantwithasmile,EdunapproachedMomandhuggedher,whispering,"Mom,thankyouforhavingmecome!"
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Paragraph 1:Thinking Mom was right,Edun followed her down the trail.They passed a waterfall,tiny yet clear.The trickling of water made Edun feel better.To her amazement,as they walked on,there was always something to look for in the wet green woods:animal tracks,wildflowers,little creeks.Soon they caught up with Will,who eagerly showed them the photos he took of the Fox sparrow resting on a branch.【高分句型一】Together they went on,strolling past scratchy bushes,climbing over gray rocks and hiking through dwarf trees.Edun loomed above those little trees,exclaiming,"Look,Mom,I'm a giant."Unknowingly they had already done most of the climb.(艾顿继续前行,看到了美丽的风景,不知不觉间,已经完成了大部分攀登)
Paragraph 2:Twenty minutes later,they saw the cabin.Edun and Will started racing up the hill.Finally,there they were in the small but cozy sabin.Through its window,Edun saw faraway meadows and lakes,and many more mountains,a whole new world emerging before her eyes.That night,everybody stayed up late to see the stars.So many stars clustering up there,Edun proposed,"I need to take a picture of them." "Click!"The camera froze the moment.Radiant with a smile,Edun approached Mom and hugged her,whispering,"Mom,thank you for having me come!"【高分句型二】(他们来到小屋,晚上看星星,艾顿感谢妈妈邀请自己来)
[点评]
本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。