[解析]
It was very cold on last Monday morning. I was walking on my way to school when I notice two street cleaners cleaning the street in the cold wind. Saw them working so hard on such a cold morning, I was deeply touching and made up my mind to do something for them.
After arriving at school, our classmates gathered together to discuss when we could do∧ help the street cleaners. Some classmate suggested helping with the cleaning. Some suggested bringing any warm clothes to them while others advised getting some hot food to keep us warm. Finally we both agreed on helping with the cleaning and bringing some hot food to them.
详解:
1. 去掉on.考查介词.此处表示"上星期一的早晨天很冷",on是多余的.
2. notice改为noticed.考查时态.这里叙述的是过去的事情,因此要用一般过去时.
3. Saw改为Seeing.考查非谓语动词.通过分析可知此处用非谓语动词做状语,这时其逻辑主语是句子主语I,I与see之间是主动关系,因此要用现在分词形式.
4. touching改为touched.考查形容词.此处表示"我被深深的触动了",主语是I,因此要用touched表示"感到触动的",而touching意为"令人触动的",一般说明物的情况.
5. when改为what.考查名词性从句引导词.句意:我的同学们聚在一起讨论我们应该做些什么去帮助清洁工,这里是一个宾语从句,从句缺少主语,结合语境及句意可知这里要用what来引导.
6. help前加to.考查不定式.句意:我的同学们聚在一起讨论我们应该做些什么去帮助清洁工,由此可知这里用不定式短语做状语表示目的.
7. classmate改为classmates.考查名词单复数.classmate是可数名词,根据前面的some可知这里要用复数形式.
8. any改为some.考查代词.句意:一些建议带一些暖和的衣服给他们,这是一个肯定句因此用some,而any一般用于否定句或疑问句中.
9. us改为them.考查代词指代.结合语境可知这里表示"让他们保暖",因此要把us改为them.
10. both改为all.考查代词.主语是we,代指前面我和我的同学们,因此要用all,而both表示"两者都".