假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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203136. （2016•师大附中•二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up．To my opinion，it is hard to be successful．Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up．And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try．That's okay．Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures．J．K．Rowling，wrote Harry Potter，had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published．Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team．He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career．But he once said，"I have failed over and over and over again in my life．And that's because I succeed．"

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It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up．To my opinion，it is hard to be successful．Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up．And you won't necessary succeed in everything ~~for~~ the first time you try．That's okay．Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures．J．K．Rowling，∧wrote Harry Potter，had her first Harry Potter book ~~was~~ rejected 12 times before it was finally published．Michael Jordan was removed∧his high school basketball team．He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career．But he once said，"I have failed over and over and over again in my life．And that's because I succeed．"
详解：
1．To改为In 考查介词．in one's opinion 意为"依某人来看"，是固定搭配．
2．were改为are 考查动词时态．根据时间状语从句as you grow up，此处应用一般现在时．
3．necessary改为necessarily 考查副词．succeed是动词，要用副词修饰．
4．去掉for 考查连词．for the first time 意为"首次，第一次"，作独立作状语；the first time意为"第一次"，是连词，后接从句，不能独立使用．此处有从句 you try，故用连词 the first time．因此去掉介词for．
5．one改为ones 考查代词．根据the one代指的是some of the most successful people一些成功的人，是复数，故此处应用ones，即：世界上有一些最成功的人就是曾经最失败的人．
6．加who 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词J．K．Rowling在从句中作主语，用关系代词who．
7．去掉was 考查词语用法．have sth．done意为"遭受"．根据句意：她的第一部《哈利•波特》被拒绝了12次．此处去掉动词was．
8．加from 考查介词．根据句意：迈克尔乔丹被从他的高中篮球队裁下来．remove from意为"从…中移开〔拿走，除掉〕"，此处应加上介词from
9．miss改为missed 考查动词时态． and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，前面的动词lost是一般过去时，此处也是一般过去时．
10．because改为why 考查连词．根据句意：这就是我为什么成功了．用连词why，此处是强调结果的表语从句，because用于强调原因．

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
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共享时间:2022-07-23 难度:1 相似度:2

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共享时间:2022-07-20 难度:1 相似度:2

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共享时间:2022-02-10 难度:1 相似度:2

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共享时间:2022-07-12 难度:1 相似度:2

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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共享时间:2022-02-06 难度:1 相似度:2

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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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共享时间:2022-07-04 难度:1 相似度:2

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Today we had a chemistry test．I found the test difficulty，but I tried hardly to do it．Suddenly Mary，my best friend，asking me to let her to copy my answers．After think for some time，I let her copy my answers．But after the test，all of us were called to the teacher's office．The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests．We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents．I was very upset．I didn't cheat．I was just helping a friend．Why doee punish me？

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204522. （2023•西安市蓝田县城关中学•高一下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With summer vacation around the corner，some students just can't contain our excitement，because it is the best season to go swimming.Although swimming is a good kind of exercise that help us keep healthy，but it can also be very dangerous sometimes.Here is some advices for you.Firstly，you are not allowed swim alone in the river.It would be better to go with your parents.Next，you should do some warm-up exercises after getting into the water，that will reduce the risk of getting into trouble.Lastly，you'd better not swim for too long，or you will feel too tiring.Kept this in mind，you will have a safely holiday.

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