[解析]
I still remember a embarrassing experience last month.That day,I was overslept.I was running around my apartment quickly because there was something scarier for me than be late for work.I called a taxi,put on a dress,put all the necessary things into my bags,and closed it without even looking into it.Then I took my wallet,and run out.It didn't take much time∧ get to work because I was hurrying the driver at every traffic light.At last,I was in the office. Surprising,when I opened my bag,I saw the 2 yellow or scared eyes of my cat looking at me.She seemed to be just as shocking as I was.
详解:
1.a改为an.考冠词.句意:我仍然记得上个月的一次尴尬经历.experience表示"经历"时是可数名词,前面需加不定冠词,embarrassing以元音音素开头,应加不定冠词an.故将a改为an.
2.去掉was.考查语态.句意:那天我睡过头了.oversleep睡过头、睡得太久,不及物动词,I与 oversleep之间是主动关系,不用被动语态,故去掉was.
3.something改为 nothing.考查代词.句意:对我来说,没有什么比上班退到更可怕的了.nothing+形容词比较级+than表示"没有什么比……更……的了",固定用法.故将something改为 nothing.
4.be改为being.考查动名词.句意:对我来说,没有什么比上班迟到更可怕的了.此处than用作介词,后面用动名词形式作宾语,故将be改为 being.
5.bag改为bags.考查名词的数.句意:我叫了一辆出租车,穿了件衣服,把所有必需的东西都放进了包里.根据语境和下文人称代词it可知,bag应为单数名词,故将bags改为bag.
6.run改为ran.考查时态.句意:然后,我拿起钱包,跑了出去.本文记述 last month(上个月)发生的事情,整体时态为一般过去时,此处应与整体时态一致,故将run改为ran.
7.get前加to.考查不定式.句意:上班没花太多时间,因为我在每个红绿灯处都催着司机.It takes time to do sth.花费时间做某事,固定句型,It为形式主语,真正的主语是后面的动词不定式,不定式符合to不可省略.故在get前加to.
8.Surprising改为Surprisingly.考查副词.句意:令人惊讶的是,当我打开包,我看到我的猫那两只黄色和恐惧的眼睛正看着我.此处作状语修饰整个句子,应用副词Surprisingly,故将Surprising改为 Surprisingly.
9.or改为and.考查连词.句意:令人惊讶的是,当我打开包,我看到我的猫那两只黄色和恐惧的眼睛正看着我.yellow和 scared修饰名词eyes,是并列关系而非选择关系,故将or改为and.
10.shocking改为shocked.考查形容词.句意:她似乎和我一样震惊.形容词shocking的含义是"令人震惊的",表示事物本身所具有的性质或特征,此处主语是She,表达人对事物的感受,应用形容词shocked"感到震惊的",故将 shocking改为 shocked.