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I can still remember my elementary school teacher very well.Sue was my first grade teacher,and she was warm﹣hearted.We have real lessons with her.I would often get into trouble in her class,but I also learned a lot of.In the second grade,we had Rhonda,who treated us kind.We all liked her.She was our friend more than our teacher.Laura was my third grade teacher,and she was really humor!Her class was probably the more fun.But my fourth grade teacher changed∧life.Her name was Shirley Richardson.She was the six﹣foot﹣tall African﹣American woman.Everyone was scared of her,and in fact her heart was soft.I stopped getting into trouble and also starting to take school seriously.
详解:
1.teacher改为teachers;名词错误.句意表达的是我的小学老师,肯定不是一个老师,要用复数.
2.have改为had;时态错误.文章是回忆过去的老师,要用一般过去时态.
3.去掉of;短语搭配错误.句中a lot是修饰谓语动词learned,要用副词短语,表达程度;a lot of修饰名词,表示数量很多.
4.kind改为kindly;副词错误.句中kind修饰动词treated,要用副词形式.
5.humor改为humorous;形容词错误.句中humor作系动词的表语,且前面有副词really修饰,要用形容词形式.
6.more改为most;句中more前有定冠词the,句意表达的是最高级的含义,意思是她的课最有趣.
7.加my;代词错误.句意表达的是老师改变了我的生活,要用形容词性物主代词来限定,使句意明确.
8.the改为a;冠词错误.句意表达的是泛指,要用不定冠词来限定.
9.and改为but;连词错误.句意表达的是转折,不是并列.
10.starting改为started;分词错误.句中start是和stopped构成并列谓语,不是作stopped的宾语.