[答案]
1.去掉to;2.carry改为carried;3.his改为my;4.loudly改为loud;5.when改为where;
6.see改为seeing;7.are改为is;8.too改为either;9.gift改为gifts;10.impressive前加an
[解析]
When I was six years old, my grandpa brought to home a colorful schoolbag for me.I carry the new empty bag on his shoulders for an hour. When I put it on the table,I heard a loudly sound from the inside.I searched every corner when something might hide, eventually see a little toy car and a red fish. Today my tiny red fish are unable to swim in water anymore. The toy car can't move in funny circles, too. However,I can still feel the great joy of receiving the gift in the schoolbag. Thank you, Grandpa, for bringing me such∧ impressive memory!
解析:
1. 去掉to. 考查介词。句意:我六岁的时候,爷爷给我带了一个五颜六色的书包回家。home是副词,所以不用介词修饰,所以去掉to.
2.carry改为carried. 考查时态。句意:我六岁的时候,爷爷给我带了一个五颜六色的书包回家。根据上句的时间状语When I was six years old,可知和上句时态一致,谓语动词用过去式,所以carry改为carried.
3.his改为my. 考查代词。句意:我把新的空书包背在我的肩上一个小时。根据句意可知是"我的"肩膀,所以his改为my.
4.loudly改为loud. 考查形容词。句意:当我把它放在桌子上的时候,我听到有一个响亮的声音从里面传出来。修饰名词sound,用形容词,所以loudly改为loud.
5.when改为where. 考查定语从句。句意:我在每个角落寻找,发现了一辆小玩具车和一条红鱼。修饰先行词every corner,作定语从句something might hide的地点状语,关系词用where,所以when改为where.
6.see改为seeing. 考查现在分词。句意:我在每个角落寻找,发现了一辆小玩具车和一条红鱼。see作伴随状语,和主语I是主动关系,用现在分词,所以see改为seeing.
7.are改为is. 考查主谓一致。句意:今天我的小红小鱼再也不能在水里游泳了。和主语my tiny red fish一致,系动词用is,所以are改为is.
8.too改为either. 考查单词辨析。句意:玩具车也不能在滑稽的圈子里转了。too用于肯定句;either用于否定和疑问句,本句是否定句,所以too改为either.
9.gift改为gifts. 考查名词。句意:然而,我仍然能感受到收到书包里礼物的喜悦。根据上文可知是两件礼物,所以gift改为gifts.
10.impressive前加an. 考查冠词。句意:谢谢你,爷爷,给我带来了如此令人难忘的记忆。修饰以元音音素开头的名词impressive memory,表示"一个",用an,所以impressive前加an.
[点评]
本题考查了"人与自我,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。