假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不记分

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204721. （2022•西安中学•高一下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next，trying talking with a student who is ay as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble，you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence，you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours，
Lily

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Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is ∧common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all，believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you lack self﹣confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next， trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interests with you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble，you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence，you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours，
Lily
详解：
（1）is后加a.考查冠词。句意：你的问题在中学生中很常见。泛指一个，所以用不定冠词a，故is后加a。
（2）advices改为advice.考查不可数名词。句意：也许下面的建议可以帮助你。advice是不可数名词，无复数，故advices改为advice。
（3）in改成of.考查固定短语。句意：首先，相信自己。first of all是固定短语"首先"，故in改成of。
（4）去掉it.考查定语从句。句意：你必须做的第一件事是对你的同学微笑。先行词是thing，you must do是定语从句，从句中却宾语，所以可以省略关系代词，it成分冗余，故去掉it。
（5）loud改为louder.考查比较级。句意：一个微笑比任何话语都更能说明你想交朋友的愿望。后面有than，前面必须用比较级louder，故loud改为louder。
（6）him改为them.考查代词。句意：你的微笑表明你对他们很友好。根据上下文联系可知指的是你的朋友们，所以用them，故him改为them。
（7）trying改为try.考查祈使句。句意：接下来，试着和一个和你一样害羞或者和你有相同兴趣的学生交谈。分析句子可知本句是一个祈使句，所以用动词原形try，故trying改为try。
（8）share改为shares.考查主谓一致。句意：接下来，试着和一个和你一样害羞或者和你有相同兴趣的学生交谈。此处的who指代的先行词a student，所以谓语动词用第三人称单数形式，故share改为shares。
（9）Unless改为If.考查连词。句意：如果有人有困难，你应该准备帮助他。表示"如果"，而不是"除非"，所以用连词if引导，故Unless改为If。
（10）possibly改为possible.考查形容词。句意：你可以交尽可能多的朋友。应该是as many as possible尽可能多地，故possibly改为possible。

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203365. （2016•西工大附中•八模） Dear Xiaohua，
It is four days since Mother accepted the operation．She is feeling much more better．The doctors told me the operation was successful，but because her old age she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks．The doctors also say it was quite necessary for her to do so．We expect to get a full report in two and three days．Please tell the good news to rest of the family as fast as possible．You needn't to come here．I'm able to look after Mother by myself．You'd better send flowers to Mother．She will feel happily．
Yours，
Xiaohui．

共享时间:2016-06-14 难度:1 相似度:2

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