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One day,our teacher told us that we could have an exam and asked us to go over our
would
lessons carefully.However,my friend Lisa spends too much time playing computer
spent
games.As the result,she had no time to prepare and wanted to copy my answers.I
a
refused her and she became angry with me.In that exam,she got low scores by
high
copy another student's answers.She was happy and I advised her to tell the teacher
copying but
the truth.She was even angry.It was later when she realized her fault and
angrier that
apologized to the teacher.From then on,I helped her a lot of with her studies and
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she made great progress.Not until then∧she understand what friendship was.
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1.could改为would.情态动词错误.句意表达的是过去将来,即我们将要有一次考试,不是表示能力.
2.spends改为spent.时态错误.文章讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
3.the改为a.冠词错误.as a result固定短语,结果.
4.low改为high.考查形容词.句意表达的是考了高分.
5.copy改为copying.动词错误.句中copy作介词by的宾语,要用动名词形式.
6.and改为but.连词错误.句意表示的转折,不是承接.
7.angry改为angrier.形容词错误.句意表达的是暗含比较,意思是更生气了.
8.when改为that.连词错误.it was…that…构成强调句型,对时间状语later进行强调.
9.of去掉.介词错误.句中a lot修饰谓语动词helped,在句中作状语.
10.加did.倒装句错误.not until加状语位于句首时,句子要倒装;句中的谓语是实意动词且表示过去,要添加助动词did构成倒装.