假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不算分

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202943. （2017•师大附中•十一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不算分．
It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school．After registered in the classroom，the volunteer took me to my dormitory．Altogether I had five roommates，two of which arrived later．I got to know my new roommate immediately．Although I was quite unwilling to say"Goodbye"to my father，but he had to leave to my hometown in the evening．I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently．Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun．

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It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school．After registered in the classroom，the volunteer took me to my dormitory．Altogether I had five roommates，two of which arrived later．I got to know my new roommate immediately．Although I was quite unwilling to say"Goodbye"to my father，~~but~~ he had to leave to my hometown in the evening．I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently．Not until then ∧ I know my senior high school life had real begun．
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1．walk改为 walked．考查动词时态．根据"It was on a warm autumn day"可知，事情发生在过去，用一般过去时．
2．registered改为 registering．考查动名词．after是介词，后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语，用动名词形式．
3．the改为a．考查冠词．volunteer是可数名词，且第一次在文中出现，用不定冠词修饰．
4．which改为whom．考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知，应用whom引导非限定性定语从句，在从句中作介词of的宾语，修饰先行词five roommates．
5．roommate改为roommates．考查名词复数．由上文的"I had five roommates"可知，室友不止一个，故用复数形式．
6．去掉but或but改为yet．考查连词．在英语中，although和but不能同时出现在一个句子中，要去掉but．也可将but改为yet．注意：此处也可将Although删掉，但是语意上没有修改but好．
7．to改为for．考查介词．leave for意为"前往"，为固定词组．
8．me改为 myself．考查代词．与句子主语I呼应，应用反身代词，意为"照顾好自己"．
9．then后加did．考查倒装句．not until置于句首时，常采用部分倒装，即把助动词放在主语之前．由时间状语then和下文的时态可知，此处用一般过去时，用did帮助倒装．
10．real改为really．考查副词．begun是动词，修饰动词应用副词．

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205828. （2017•西安中学•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when wevisitBeijing last month．It is in the downtown area，butit is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．
We lived in acomfortablydouble-room with a big bath．What I liked bestwerethe free high-speed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email messages every day．I also sharedformy friends many photostakingin Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we enjoyed several localdish．
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend ofmewho is going to Beijing．

共享时间:2017-07-11 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202620. （2020•西安中学•一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life． I can't agree complete． Last Friday， I woke up very early and decide to take a walk． In the square there many senior citizens were dancing， I found several elders bury in feeding birds． Without many cars， I realized the city looked so clean but beautiful． Some coffee shops were decorated pretty well， which attracted our eyes． The whole city was covered with green tree， making it green city． At this moment， I found the city was so interesting． How I regret ignore its beauty before!

共享时间:2020-03-13 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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205966. （2016•西安一中•高一下期末） Laughter is one of the most effective way to deal with anything unpleasant．
As a single mother of two young girls，my life is stressful sometimes．I love my girl，and there are times when it is difficult to satisfy the demands of a child and a full-time student．Although telling a couple of jokes can't make them to disappear，turning chores into games certainly helped．Getting up in the mornings and getting ready for school are much more enjoyable when there is hearty laughter．
Laughter is the best medicine．Last summer the close family member was diagnosed with cancer．The doctor told him that he only had a couple of months to live．But he lived every day to the fullest，laughed and having fun．The doctor said it was her appositive attitude that kept him living so long．Because of that he had much more days than the doctor originally foretold．
That Robert Frost said，"If we couldn't laugh，we would all go stupid．Laughter may not make all the problems disappear，but laughter softens the blows that could easy bring us down．"

共享时间:2016-07-18 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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214686. （2017•西安中学•高一上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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Dear Brad，
I'm very glad to hear from you．In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China．Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group．Comparing with our parents，life for us is getting much hard．The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford．Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car．Therefore，I don't think love built on house and cars is true love，and I doubt how long it will last．
As a matter of fact，though situations are tough today，a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life．I believe we will have a nice future．
Li Hua．

共享时间:2017-11-13 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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203193. （2016•西安中学•三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Music and songs play a important part in our daily life．For example，it can bring us pleasure and make us happy．However，they can help us improve our study and working efficiency．I was fond of listening to songs and music very much，but my favorite song is Country Road．The lyrics and music bring me into a beautiful world in that I am loved to Grandma．What's more，they make me think of my wonderful childhood was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow．In a word，once enjoying，the song will never be forgotten．

共享时间:2016-04-04 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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203174. （2016•西安中学•四模）假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从11 处起）不计分．
Patience is great importance in our daily life．Once I waited for a bus to come at a stop．30 minutes past，but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decide to walk on foot．But no sooner had I left when a bus arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minutes，I would have caught it．If I chose to take the next bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes．Only then do I realize my problem．Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in．Now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience．

共享时间:2016-04-30 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202981. （2017•西安中学•三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从 11 处起）不计分．
A young man calling Brother Low-Carbon became a hit on the Internet in 2012．He suggests we should live a low carbon life，which means using more energy in his daily life，thus reducing carbon dioxide in the air．For example，he always collects some waste paper or uses the blank sides to write something on．While watching TV，he always turned down the lamp to the minimum and turns off the light．Besides，he goes to work by bike instead driving．Some people think what he is doing is just a show．No one can live such a simple life with so many modern invention around us．Personally，I strong support his idea and his behavior．Although what he is doing have no huge effect on global warming，he can enjoy healthy life at least．

共享时间:2017-04-15 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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219766. （2020•长安区一中•高二上一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短信。信中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。请按照下列格式修改：
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir/ Madam，
    Word came which some foreign teachers would pay a visit to our school for communication.Having read your requirements，I am willing to be one of the volunteer.
    I am Li Hua，a senior 3 student.I think I am qualified for the job.I have a good command of orally English，which can make me to communicate with foreigners freely.What's more，I was always ready to help others and full of spirit of devotion.Aimed to do the work well，I'd like to receive any necessary training，and do whichever our school requires.Believe me，I'll make full preparation and there is no doubt that I will be an outstanding volunteer.
    I would appreciate you if you could take my request into consideration.

共享时间:2020-10-26 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202287. （2022•西工大附中•七模） No body language can be more attractive/fascinating than smiling．Not only can a beautiful smile make （1）       （us） happy，but also it enables others to feel （2）       （delight）．（3）       a smile is so powerful that it gives people （4）       （suffer） from disasters great courage．
    A little boy（5）       （name） Lang Zheng，for instance，impressed and encouraged a great many people （6）       a serious earthquake happened in Wen Chuan．Right after he （7）       （rescue） by the soldiers from the ruins，he saluted and smiled to them．His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in （8）       （sad）．
    It is safe/no exaggeration to say that without smile our life （9）       （be）colorless and difficult．It is suggested that we （10）       （smile） as much as possible．

共享时间:2022-06-09 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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219483. （2021•铁一中学•高一上二月） One day，I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ，people were chatting with English.I try to chat with some of them.To my surprised，I found the oral English of some junior students were better than mine.I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ.But every day after that，I would spend one hour practise my oral English：on-QQ.Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions.With time went by，I found that I could even communicate with some college students freely.

共享时间:2021-12-24 难度:2 相似度:1

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219404. （2021•鄠邑二中•高二上二月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Thank you for your letter，what really made me happy.I'm glad to know that you've come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.I'm surely you'll have a good time.Actually，I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old，for I have long been out of practice.Luckily，I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.Then I can spare some time to learn it again，such that we can practice together on every day.Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China.See you sooner.

共享时间:2021-12-15 难度:2 相似度:1

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205494. （2020•莲湖区•高一下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Since last year，the heavily smog has occurred in our city．The smog，that has made our daily life inconvenient，has also done great harm people's health．Many traffic accident have happened because of the bad weather．Besides，many people have to stay inside to avoid the harm air．What's the worse，many people have suffered from bad coughs，sore throats but other serious diseases．
Personally，I thought we should make efforts to protect the environment．I strongly agree with the idea what we can try to drive less and buy green products．Only when we have the awareness（意识）of environmental protection can us have cleaner air．

共享时间:2020-07-11 难度:2 相似度:1

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219593. （2020•西安一中•高二上一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉；
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The first person I met in my high school was my deskmate， with that I fell in love at first sight. She was warm-hearted and always wore a honest smile on her face. I was homesick in the first few days， unable to adjust to the new school. It was with her help which I got familiar the school. However， what impressed me most was her diligence and determine. When faced with a challenge in study， she would try out her best to solve it. Whenever I was in trouble， she would encourage myself and help me out. But for her encouragement， I wouldn't have progressed so fast and steady.
Have so nice a girl as my friend is great luck for me. May our friendship lasts forever.

共享时间:2020-10-10 难度:2 相似度:1

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219651. （2020•长安区一中•高一上二月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分．
My village lie in the mountains in southwest China．Although the climate and landscape are pleased，people lead a tough life there．At the beginning of the 21^st century，the government began to attach great importance to its development，under the influence of that，people's living condition began to improve．A lot of roads were built and plenty of trade centers were newly found，which made them convenient to develop economy．What's more，many student was admitted into famous universities．In a word，thank to the government's support，great changes have been taken place in the past few years．My village takes up a new look now．

共享时间:2020-12-23 难度:2 相似度:1

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218737. （2022•西工大附中•高三上二月）文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
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Fatima Madrigal of California recent gave birth to a boy and a girl.However，which surprises us most is that twins have different birth dates and even birth years.
Alfredo was born on December 31st，2021 at 11：45 p.m.About 15 minutes late，his sister Aylin was born on January 1st，2022.Fatima said her family，including her partner Robert and their three others children，were happy to welcome the new babies.The babies were supposed to come for two weeks，but their early arrive created a rare set of birth dates and years.Aylin weighing 2.66 kilograms and her brother 2.75 kilograms at birth.The medical center where the twins were born says there are about 120，000 twins born in every year in the U.S.However，twins with different birthdays are rare，and the chance of twins being born in different years is about one in two millions.

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