假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不算分

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202943. （2017•师大附中•十一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不算分．
It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school．After registered in the classroom，the volunteer took me to my dormitory．Altogether I had five roommates，two of which arrived later．I got to know my new roommate immediately．Although I was quite unwilling to say"Goodbye"to my father，but he had to leave to my hometown in the evening．I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently．Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun．

共享时间:2017-07-14 难度:2

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It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school．After registered in the classroom，the volunteer took me to my dormitory．Altogether I had five roommates，two of which arrived later．I got to know my new roommate immediately．Although I was quite unwilling to say"Goodbye"to my father，~~but~~ he had to leave to my hometown in the evening．I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently．Not until then ∧ I know my senior high school life had real begun．
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1．walk改为 walked．考查动词时态．根据"It was on a warm autumn day"可知，事情发生在过去，用一般过去时．
2．registered改为 registering．考查动名词．after是介词，后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语，用动名词形式．
3．the改为a．考查冠词．volunteer是可数名词，且第一次在文中出现，用不定冠词修饰．
4．which改为whom．考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知，应用whom引导非限定性定语从句，在从句中作介词of的宾语，修饰先行词five roommates．
5．roommate改为roommates．考查名词复数．由上文的"I had five roommates"可知，室友不止一个，故用复数形式．
6．去掉but或but改为yet．考查连词．在英语中，although和but不能同时出现在一个句子中，要去掉but．也可将but改为yet．注意：此处也可将Although删掉，但是语意上没有修改but好．
7．to改为for．考查介词．leave for意为"前往"，为固定词组．
8．me改为 myself．考查代词．与句子主语I呼应，应用反身代词，意为"照顾好自己"．
9．then后加did．考查倒装句．not until置于句首时，常采用部分倒装，即把助动词放在主语之前．由时间状语then和下文的时态可知，此处用一般过去时，用did帮助倒装．
10．real改为really．考查副词．begun是动词，修饰动词应用副词．

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205966. （2016•西安一中•高一下期末） Laughter is one of the most effective way to deal with anything unpleasant．
As a single mother of two young girls，my life is stressful sometimes．I love my girl，and there are times when it is difficult to satisfy the demands of a child and a full-time student．Although telling a couple of jokes can't make them to disappear，turning chores into games certainly helped．Getting up in the mornings and getting ready for school are much more enjoyable when there is hearty laughter．
Laughter is the best medicine．Last summer the close family member was diagnosed with cancer．The doctor told him that he only had a couple of months to live．But he lived every day to the fullest，laughed and having fun．The doctor said it was her appositive attitude that kept him living so long．Because of that he had much more days than the doctor originally foretold．
That Robert Frost said，"If we couldn't laugh，we would all go stupid．Laughter may not make all the problems disappear，but laughter softens the blows that could easy bring us down．"

共享时间:2016-07-18 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202620. （2020•西安中学•一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life． I can't agree complete． Last Friday， I woke up very early and decide to take a walk． In the square there many senior citizens were dancing， I found several elders bury in feeding birds． Without many cars， I realized the city looked so clean but beautiful． Some coffee shops were decorated pretty well， which attracted our eyes． The whole city was covered with green tree， making it green city． At this moment， I found the city was so interesting． How I regret ignore its beauty before!

共享时间:2020-03-13 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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205828. （2017•西安中学•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when wevisitBeijing last month．It is in the downtown area，butit is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．
We lived in acomfortablydouble-room with a big bath．What I liked bestwerethe free high-speed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email messages every day．I also sharedformy friends many photostakingin Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we enjoyed several localdish．
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend ofmewho is going to Beijing．

共享时间:2017-07-11 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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203174. （2016•西安中学•四模）假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从11 处起）不计分．
Patience is great importance in our daily life．Once I waited for a bus to come at a stop．30 minutes past，but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decide to walk on foot．But no sooner had I left when a bus arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minutes，I would have caught it．If I chose to take the next bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes．Only then do I realize my problem．Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in．Now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience．

共享时间:2016-04-30 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202981. （2017•西安中学•三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从 11 处起）不计分．
A young man calling Brother Low-Carbon became a hit on the Internet in 2012．He suggests we should live a low carbon life，which means using more energy in his daily life，thus reducing carbon dioxide in the air．For example，he always collects some waste paper or uses the blank sides to write something on．While watching TV，he always turned down the lamp to the minimum and turns off the light．Besides，he goes to work by bike instead driving．Some people think what he is doing is just a show．No one can live such a simple life with so many modern invention around us．Personally，I strong support his idea and his behavior．Although what he is doing have no huge effect on global warming，he can enjoy healthy life at least．

共享时间:2017-04-15 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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203193. （2016•西安中学•三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Music and songs play a important part in our daily life．For example，it can bring us pleasure and make us happy．However，they can help us improve our study and working efficiency．I was fond of listening to songs and music very much，but my favorite song is Country Road．The lyrics and music bring me into a beautiful world in that I am loved to Grandma．What's more，they make me think of my wonderful childhood was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow．In a word，once enjoying，the song will never be forgotten．

共享时间:2016-04-04 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202287. （2022•西工大附中•七模） No body language can be more attractive/fascinating than smiling．Not only can a beautiful smile make （1）       （us） happy，but also it enables others to feel （2）       （delight）．（3）       a smile is so powerful that it gives people （4）       （suffer） from disasters great courage．
    A little boy（5）       （name） Lang Zheng，for instance，impressed and encouraged a great many people （6）       a serious earthquake happened in Wen Chuan．Right after he （7）       （rescue） by the soldiers from the ruins，he saluted and smiled to them．His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in （8）       （sad）．
    It is safe/no exaggeration to say that without smile our life （9）       （be）colorless and difficult．It is suggested that we （10）       （smile） as much as possible．

共享时间:2022-06-09 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202468. （2021•西安中学•九模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Recently， one of my friends have sent me a short message， say that true friends are one soul in two bodies， which moves me very much and makes me think how true friendship is．
Nowadays， the word friendship has been used very often that it has lost its meaning． Some jokingly put it that friends are made to be taken advantage． In my opinion， true friendship doesn't mean that when you need your friends help， you'll treat them to dinner． True friendship is the communication of the hearts and understand of the souls． True friends keep you in the mind， no matter where they are． Once you have found such true friends， do treasure him． With friendship， life proves happily and harmonious．

共享时间:2021-06-22 难度:2 相似度:1

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201850. （2024•西安一中•二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom，
How are you doing？I am writing to invite you visit the new museum in ours city with me this Sunday morning.The museum，which opens last month，is said to be great and real worth visiting.We will meet at 7 o'clock at a school gate.Then we will take No.7 bus and it will take the bus 45 minute to take us there.There are many valuable pictures，paintings and sculptures on display in the museum，showed the long and colorfully history of our city.I am sure we will learn a lot of more about the history of our city and have a good time.If you are free and interesting，please get ready ahead of time and join me.
Yours，Li Hua

共享时间:2024-03-19 难度:2 相似度:1

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205494. （2020•莲湖区•高一下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Since last year，the heavily smog has occurred in our city．The smog，that has made our daily life inconvenient，has also done great harm people's health．Many traffic accident have happened because of the bad weather．Besides，many people have to stay inside to avoid the harm air．What's the worse，many people have suffered from bad coughs，sore throats but other serious diseases．
Personally，I thought we should make efforts to protect the environment．I strongly agree with the idea what we can try to drive less and buy green products．Only when we have the awareness（意识）of environmental protection can us have cleaner air．

共享时间:2020-07-11 难度:2 相似度:1

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205317. （2021•新城区•高一下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I go to visit my grandparent who live in the countryside every summer vacation.They plant all kinds vegetables and some fruit trees，so every day we eat fresh vegetables and fruit picking from the garden.Near their village there is a small river in that villagers often wash clothes，chatting and laughing.The river is used to be dirty because of be polluted by a chemical factory.Since its closure several years ago，the water has become clean.I sometime go with my grandma to washing clothes.I like the feeling that the clean water flow over my feet and enjoy the relaxing atmosphere.The country life is simple but healthy and I like them.

共享时间:2021-07-12 难度:2 相似度:1

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204890. （2022•长安区一中•高二上期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jason，
    I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Students' Union.On behalf of the students，I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for invite us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week.To get further information，I'm writing to make some inquiries concerning an event.
    Firstly，I'm wondering when the event was scheduled to start so that we can apply to visas and book air tickets in advance.Also，I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week，because the information can help you make better preparation and promote our participation.Lastly，could you please to tell us what type of accommodation（s） will provided？If possible，we hope to stay in the school dormitory，where will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.
    Thanks again for your kind invitation.It would be high appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

共享时间:2022-03-02 难度:2 相似度:1

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204814. （2022•周至四中•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning，when I looked out of the window，I excited found it was snowing heavily.Attracting by the beautiful sight，I decided to go out to take some photo.The snow finally stopped at noon，and I couldn't wait go outside with my camera.As I walked on the path in front of our building，I see a boy suddenly slip on the snow-covered ground.It was at that moment when I realized what I should do.Immediately，I ran back home to get a broom but started to sweep the path.I worked such hard that I sweated a lot of.An hour later，the thick snow was cleared away.Looking at the clean path，my neighbors both smiled and gave me thumbs up.I felt happy that I did something for my neighborhood.

共享时间:2022-07-01 难度:2 相似度:1

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204675. （2023•西安高级中学•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a middle-school student，I love to do the exercise with my classmates.Doing different kinds of exercise are good for our health.After class，I'd like to play football with my friends.We usual play it for two hours.Sometimes we win，sometimes we lose，and it doesn't matter.We always have a good time that we play football.Doing exercise makes me strong than before and I make a lot good friends.Now I am the captain of the school's team.When I grew up，I want to play football in the name of our countries and win the championship.I hope my dream will come truth one day.

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204579. （2023•鄠邑区•高二上期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Thank you for your letter，what really made me happy.I'm glad to know that you've come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.I'm surely you'll have a good time.Actually，I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old，for I have long been out of practice.Luckily，I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.Then I can spare some time to learn it again，such that we can practice together on every day.Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China.See you sooner.

共享时间:2023-02-02 难度:2 相似度:1

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