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My village lie in the mountains in southwest China.Although the climate and landscape are pleased,people lead a tough life there.At the beginning of the 21st century,the government began to attach great importance to its development,under the influence of that,people's living condition began to improve.A lot of roads were built and plenty of trade centers were newly found,which made them convenient to develop economy.What's more, ∧great many students were admitted into famous universities.In a word, thank to the government's support,great changes have been taken place in the past few years.My village takes up a new look now.
解析1.lie改为lies.考查主谓一致.此处主语为my village,且这里说的是一般的情况,因此谓语动词要用单数第三人称.故lie改为lies.
2.pleased改为pleasing.考查形容词.此处表达"尽管这里的气候和风景很舒适",因此要用pleasing"令人愉快的,舒适的",而pleased意为(人)感到满意的,高兴的.故pleased改为pleasing.
3.that改为which.考查定语从句引导词.通过分析可知这里是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词是前面的句子the government began to attach great importance to its development的意思,要用which引导该从句,which来代替前面整句话的意思.that不能引导非限制性定语从句.因此要把that改为which.故that改为which.
4.condition改为conditions.此处表达"人们的生活条件开始改善",condition是可数名词,根据句意可知这里应该用复数形式.故condition改为conditions.
5.found改为founded.考查语态.此处表达"许多贸易中心建立起来",found作为动词意思是"建立",此处要用被动语态.故 found改为founded.
6.them改为it.考查代词.通过分析可知此处要用it做形式宾语,代替后面的不定式.故them改为it.
7.great前面加a.考查冠词及固定短语.a great many 意为"许多",后面加可数名词复数.故great前面加a.
8.thank改为thanks.考查动词短语.此处表达"多亏了政府的支持",thanks to意为"多亏了,幸亏".故 thank改为thanks.
9.去掉been.考查语态.此处表达"在过去几年,发生了巨大的变化",动词短语take place是一个不及物动词,不能用被动语态,由此可知要把been去掉.故去掉been.
10.up改为on.考查介词及固定短语.此处表达"我的村庄现在呈现出一个崭新的面貌",take on意为"呈现,承担",而take up意为"占据,从事",与语境不符,因此要把up改为on.故up改为on.