[答案]
1.heavily→heavy;2.that→which;3.health前面加to;4.accident→accidents;5.harm→harmful;6.the去掉;7.but→and;8.thought→think;9.what→that;10.us→we.
[解析]
Since last year,the heavily smog has occurred in our city.The smog, that has made our daily life inconvenient,has also done great harm ∧people's health.Many traffic accident have happened because of the bad weather.Besides,many people have to stay inside to avoid the harm air.What's the worse,many people have suffered from bad coughs,sore throats but other serious diseases.
Personally,I thought we should make efforts to protect the environment.I strongly agree with the idea what we can try to drive less and buy green products.Only when we have the awareness(意识)of environmental protection can us have cleaner air.
详解:
1.heavily→heavy.考查形容词.句意:自去年以来,我市出现了严重的雾霾.此处修饰名词smog,需要用形容词heavy,故将heavily改成heavy.
2.that→which.考查非限制性定语从句.句意:雾霾给我们的日常生活带来了不便,也对人们的健康造成了极大的危害.此处连接词引导一个非限制性定语从句,不能用that,连接词指代先行词smog在从句中做主语,应用关系代词which,故将that改成which.
3.health 前面加to.考查固定搭配.句意:雾霾给我们的日常生活带来了不便,也对人们的健康造成了极大的危害.do harm to 表示对…有害,固定搭配,故在health前面加to.
4.accident→accidents.考查名词复数.句意:由于天气不好,发生了许多交通事故.accident"事故,意外"是可数名词,前面有many修饰,应用复数形式,故将accident改成accidents.
5.harm→harmful.考查形容词.句意:许多人不得不呆在室内以避免有害的空气.此处作定语修饰名词air,应用形容词harmful,harmful air指"有害气体",故将harm改成harmful.
6.the去掉.考查固定搭配.句意:更糟糕的是,许多人都有严重的咳嗽、喉咙痛和其他严重的疾病.What's worse 表示"更糟糕的是",是固定搭配,定冠词the多余.故将the去掉.
7.but→and.考查连词.句意:更糟糕的是,许多人都有严重的咳嗽、喉咙痛和其他严重的疾病.bad coughs,sore throats 和other serious diseases是并列关系而非转折关系,应用and连接并列成分,故将but改成and.
8.thought→think.考查时态.句意:就我个人而言,我认为我们应该努力保护环境.这里表示的是作者现在的看法,应用一般现在时表示现在的状态,故将thought改成think.
9.what→that.考查同位语从句.句意:我非常同意我们可以少开车,买绿色产品的想法.idea后面应为同位语从句,用以说明名词idea的内容,从句中句意及结构完整,连接词在从句中不做任何成分,应用that引导.故将what改成that.
10.us→we.考查人称代词.句意:只有当我们有环保意识的时候,我们才能有更清洁的空气.only提前强调时间状语,应用不完全倒装形式,这里情态动词can提到主语之前,"我们"是句子的主语,应该用主格we,故将us改成we.
[点评]
本题考查了"日常生活,环境保护,",属于"易错题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。