[答案]
1.Delighting改为Delighted;2.this前加in;3.informations改为information;4.your改为my;5.eat改为eating;6.Additional改为Additionally;7.that改为which;8.去掉being;9.impress改为impressing;10.favorably改为favorable.
[解析]
Dear Alan,
Delighting to know the Video Production club is advertising for videos concerning memories about the Spring Festival,I'd like to participate ∧this activity.Here goes the detailed informations of my contribution.
To help people get a better understanding of it,your video focuses on what people do during the Spring Festival.Some traditional customs,such as setting off fireworks and eat dumplings,are included. Additional,a big family dinner is the most important part,after that each member enjoys the pleasure of reunion and chats until the next day comes.At the end of this video,a brief introduction of the Spring Festival is being presented in the form of subtitles, impress the viewers again.
I do hope my video can be accepted.Your favorably reply would be highly appreciated.
1.Delighting改为Delighted.考查形容词。句意:很高兴知道视频制作俱乐部正在做关于春节记忆的视频广告,我想参加这个活动。分析句子结构可知,此处为形容词短语作状语,且此处表示"我"感到高兴,应用﹣ed形式的形容词,故Delighting改为Delighted.
2.this前加in.考查介词。句意:很高兴知道视频制作俱乐部正在做关于春节记忆的视频广告,我想参加这个活动。participate是不及物动词,后面跟宾语时需要加介词in,故this前加in.
3.informations改为information.考查名词。句意:以下是我的稿件的详细信息。information"信息"不可数名词,没有复数形式,故informations改为information.
4.your改为my.考查代词。句意:为了帮助人们更好地了解它,我的视频主要关注人们在春节期间做了什么。由句意及语境可知,作者在介绍自己的参赛视频作品,故your改为my.
5.eat改为eating.考查动名词。句意:其中包括一些传统习俗,如燃放烟花和吃饺子。such as为介词短语,其后应接动名词,此处与"setting off fireworks"并列,前后形式应保持一致,故eat改为eating.
6.Additional改为Additionally.考查副词。句意:此外,一个大家庭的晚餐是最重要的部分,在那之后,每个成员都享受着团聚和聊天的乐趣,直到第二天到来。此处在句中作状语,应用副词形式,故Additional改为Additionally.
7.that改为which.考查关系词。句意:此外,一个大家庭的晚餐是最重要的部分,在那之后,每个成员都享受着团聚和聊天的乐趣,直到第二天到来。分析句子结构可知,此处是"介词+关系代词"引导的非限制性定语从句,that不可以紧跟在介词后来引导定语从句,且先行词为a big family dinner,指物,故that改为which.
8.去掉being.考查时态。句意:在这个视频的结尾,春节的简介以字幕的形式呈现,再次给观众留下深刻印象。此处为客观介绍视频要如何结束,应用一般现在时,a brief introduction与谓语动词present之间为被动关系,应用被动语态。此处无进行之意,故去掉being.
9.impress改为impressing.考查现在分词。句意:在这个视频的结尾,春节的简介以字幕的形式呈现,再次给观众留下深刻印象。分析句子结构可知,句中已经有谓语is presented,且其与impress之间无连词连接,故impress应用非谓语形式。此处impress与其逻辑主语a brief introduction之间为主动关系,应用现在分词形式,故impress改为impressing.
10.favorably改为favorable.考查形容词。句意:如能接受,不胜感激。reply在此句中是名词,需用形容词修饰,故favorably改为favorable.
[点评]
本题考查了"人与自我,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。