假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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202430. （2021•西安中学•七模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Like many boys， my favorite sport is playing basketball. To be honest， I felt clumsily when I first learned to play it because I wasn't as energetic as another， and I moved slowly. And I was determined not to left behind. I spent my spare time to practicing it. Gradually， I made progresses. I can't forget how exciting I was when I scored points for the first time. And I can still remember the joy of victory after win a match. That's why I fell in love with basketball. Since then， it had become part of my life. It strengthens my body and mind. It also helps me become more confident and strong-willed.

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人与自我，

[答案]

1.clumsily

改为

clumsy

；

2.another

改为

others

；

3.And

改为

But

；

4.left

前加

；

去掉

或

改为

；

6.progresses

改为

progress

；

7.exciting

改为

excited

；

8.win

改为

winning

；

9.why

改为

how

；

10.had

改为

has.

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Like many boys， my favorite sport is playing basketball. To be honest， I felt clumsily when I first learned to play it because I wasn't as energetic as another， and I moved slowly. And I was determined not to∧ left behind. I spent my spare time to practicing it. Gradually， I made progresses. I can't forget how exciting I was when I scored points for the first time. And I can still remember the joy of victory after win a match. That's why I fell in love with basketball. Since then， it had become part of my life. It strengthens my body and mind. It also helps me become more confident and strong﹣willed.
1.clumsily改为clumsy.考查形容词。句意：老实说，我第一次学打篮球的时候感觉很笨拙，因为我没有别人那么精力充沛，而且我走得很慢。系动词felt后要接形容词作表语，故clumsily改为clumsy.
2.another改为others.考查代词。句意：老实说，我第一次学打篮球的时候感觉很笨拙，因为我没有别人那么精力充沛，而且我走得很慢。another指三者或三者以上中的另一个，others泛指别的人，其他人，根据句意并结合语境可知，这里泛指其他男孩，故another改为others.
3.And改为But.考查连词。句意：但是我下定决心不被落在后面。分析可知，前后为转折关系，and表并列，转折关系要用but，故And改为But.
4.left前加be.考查语态。句意：但是我下定决心不被落在后面。I与fall behind之间为被动关系，应用被动语态，故left前加be.
5.去掉to或to改为in.考查固定搭配。句意：我用业余时间练习打篮球。spend...（in）doing sth表示"花钱/时间做某事"，习惯用法，故去掉to或to改为in.
6.progresses改为progress.考查名词。句意：渐渐地，我取得了进步。progress"进步"，不可数名词，故progresses改为progress.
7.exciting改为excited.考查形容词。句意：我忘不了第一次得分时我有多激动。exciting"令人兴奋的"，修饰物，excited"兴奋的"，修饰人，结合语境可知，这里指"我"兴奋，故exciting改为excited.
8.win改为winning.考查动名词。句意：我还记得赢得一场比赛后胜利的喜悦。after为介词，后接动名词作宾语，故win改为winning.
9.why改为how.考查引导词。句意：我就是这样爱上篮球的。how"如何"，表方式，why"为什么"，表原因，分析可知，文章讲述了"我"是如何一步一步爱上篮球的，故why改为how.
10.had改为has.考查时态。句意：从那时起，它就成了我生活的一部分。根据时间状语since then可知，此处应用现在完成时，又主语为it，故had改为has.

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本题考查了"人与自我，"，属于"常考题"，熟悉题型是解题的关键。

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Yours，
Lily

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204541. （2023•西安市蓝田县城关中学•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Today we had a chemistry test．I found the test difficulty，but I tried hardly to do it．Suddenly Mary，my best friend，asking me to let her to copy my answers．After think for some time，I let her copy my answers．But after the test，all of us were called to the teacher's office．The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests．We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents．I was very upset．I didn't cheat．I was just helping a friend．Why doee punish me？

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204522. （2023•西安市蓝田县城关中学•高一下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With summer vacation around the corner，some students just can't contain our excitement，because it is the best season to go swimming.Although swimming is a good kind of exercise that help us keep healthy，but it can also be very dangerous sometimes.Here is some advices for you.Firstly，you are not allowed swim alone in the river.It would be better to go with your parents.Next，you should do some warm-up exercises after getting into the water，that will reduce the risk of getting into trouble.Lastly，you'd better not swim for too long，or you will feel too tiring.Kept this in mind，you will have a safely holiday.

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