假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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201926. （2024•临潼区•二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday witnessed a friendly basketball game between students and teachers in our school with the aim of fueling students' passion for sports as well as release their overwhelming pressure.Bathing in sunshine，players from Grade 3 competed with their teachers in the basketball field surrounded by the rest of the students，who were watching excited.Both teams were playing at their best in high spirit.Although the teachers took the lead in a game at first，the students did not lose their heart and tried to catch up with their opponents.The game was filled in great excitement and passion，and ends in a draw of 2：2.Not only the exciting game relieve the students' intense stress，and their relationship with the teachers was also strengthened.

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release

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excited

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spirits

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Last Sunday witnessed a friendly basketball game between students and teachers in our school with the aim of fueling students' passion for sports as well as release their overwhelming pressure.Bathing in sunshine，players from Grade 3 competed with their teachers in the basketball field surrounded by the rest of the students，who were watching excited.Both teams were playing at their best in high spirit.Although the teachers took the lead in a game at first，the students did not lose their heart and tried to catch up with their opponents.The game was filled in great excitement and passion，and ends in a draw of 2：2.Not only ∧the exciting game relieve the students' intense stress，and their relationship with the teachers was also strengthened.
详解：
（1）考查动名词。句意：上周日，我们学校举行了一场师生篮球友谊赛，目的是激发学生对体育的热情，释放他们巨大的压力。该句中的as well as连接了动名词fueling和release，一起作复合介词with the aim of的宾语，所以后面也要用release的动名词形式。故release改为releasing。
（2）考查过去分词。句意：沐浴在阳光下，三年级的队员们在篮球场上与老师们展开了一场激烈的比赛，周围的同学们都兴奋地看着。原句中Bathing in sunshine在句中作状语，动词bath与逻辑主语players是动宾关系，要用过去分词。故Bathing改为Bathed。
（3）考查介词。句意：沐浴在阳光下，三年级的队员们在篮球场上与老师们展开了一场激烈的比赛，周围的同学们都兴奋地看着。compete with意思是"与……竞争"，通常用来描述一种更为友好或合作的商业竞争关系。但compete against"与……竞争"，常用于表示争夺胜利或优势的体育竞赛。该句描述的是篮球比赛。故with改为against。
（4）考查副词。句意：沐浴在阳光下，三年级的队员们在篮球场上与老师们展开了一场激烈的比赛，周围的同学们都兴奋地看着。在该句中，who引导非限定性定语从句，修饰谓语were watching要用副词，excited是形容词，要变成副词excitedly。故excited改为excitedly。
（5）考查名词复数。句意：两队都在兴致勃勃地发挥着自己的最佳水平。表达"情绪高涨地"要用固定短语in high spirits。故spirit改为spirits。
（6）考查定冠词。句意：虽然一开始老师们在比赛中处于领先地位，但学生们并没有失去信心，努力赶上对手。该句中的game前是特指，不是泛指，意思是"这场比赛"。故a改为the。
（7）考查介词。句意：比赛充满了激动和激情，最终以2：2的平局结束。表达"充满了……"要用固定短语be filled with…。故in改为with。
（8）考查谓语动词时态。句意：比赛充满了激动和激情，最终以2：2的平局结束。该句中并列连词and连接了两个谓语，前一个是was filled with，是一般过去时，那么后面的end也要用一般过去时，其过去式是ended。故end改为ended。
（9）考查谓语动词时态。句意：激烈的比赛不仅缓解了学生们巨大的压力，而且也加强了他们与老师的关系。这是一个由not only…but also…连接的并列句，根据后面的was also strengthened可知，句子是谓语动词时态都是一般过去时，not only后的谓语动词本来是relieved，但由于not only位于句首，其后的句子通常需要采用部分倒装，所以借助助动词did来完成部分倒装，relieve保留原形。故the前加did。
（10）考查并列连词。句意：激烈的比赛不仅缓解了学生们巨大的压力，而且也加强了他们与老师的关系。not only…but also…意思是"不仅……而且……"，是固定的并列连词短语，所以and要改为but also，但此句中后面有also，说明also与but是被分隔开来的，所以只将and改为but。故and改为but。

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2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    Nowadays fewer students take exercise due to various reason and some students fall ill every now and then because of they are not healthy or strong enough．However，we should take exercise regularly to improve our health．
    First of all，taking PE classes seriously．In PE classes we can build up our bodies with the careful guidance of PE teachers．Secondly，it is of great important to make it a routine to exercise after class or during breaks．In addition，it was also a good idea to join a sports club that you are interested．
    As the old saying go， "The first wealth is health．" Let's do more exercise to live a better and healthy life．

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218737. （2022•西工大附中•高三上二月）文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Fatima Madrigal of California recent gave birth to a boy and a girl.However，which surprises us most is that twins have different birth dates and even birth years.
Alfredo was born on December 31st，2021 at 11：45 p.m.About 15 minutes late，his sister Aylin was born on January 1st，2022.Fatima said her family，including her partner Robert and their three others children，were happy to welcome the new babies.The babies were supposed to come for two weeks，but their early arrive created a rare set of birth dates and years.Aylin weighing 2.66 kilograms and her brother 2.75 kilograms at birth.The medical center where the twins were born says there are about 120，000 twins born in every year in the U.S.However，twins with different birthdays are rare，and the chance of twins being born in different years is about one in two millions.

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218617. （2023•关山中学•高二上三月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was frightening in my first class in the US.It was my first time to sit with so much foreigners in one classroom.Unlike other classmates，I sat quietly by me.My teacher spoke very fast and I have a hard time understanding him.Though I was a newcomer in a foreign country，communicating with these foreigners was really difficulty.Therefore，I had to try to understand what they were talking about in class.But reading and writing was even harder than listening and speaking.Just one month after the school started，I had to read book and write long papers，all English.That's when the real disaster to began.

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218579. （2022•雁塔二中•高二上一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I wanted to visit Hangzhou before returning back to London.One of my tasks were to decide where to go.I took out my guidebook that there was lots of informations about the city's famous sights.At that moment，the attractive young lady came up to me and introduced himself.She offered to show me the city.She suggested we first go to the West Lake and walk along the Broken Bridge.I liked the idea.Therefore，I was worried about crossing the Broken Bridge.If it were broken，I would fell in and drown.It was probable not a good idea，so I politely refused her invitation，closing my book and walked away.

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