[解析]
The school sports meeting take place on April 22.More than two hundred student competed in over 30 events.These students have been preparing for the sports meeting for weeks but they hoped to perform well in this grand competition.After the wonderful opened ceremony,the competition time arrived.A lot of students were very excited that they gathered in a certain area,cheered for the players.When they saw my classmates,they started shouting at the top of their voice.The sports meeting was lasted until April 23.It was∧great success.
详解:
1.take改为took;考查动词的时态,根据时间状语 on April 22可知要用一般过去时.
2.student改为students;考查名词单复数,根据句意"200多名学生"可知此处应该用复数形式.
3.have改为had;考查动词的时态,结合上文分析,此处的动作应该发生在过去的过去,故用过去完成时.
4.but改为and;考查连词,结合句意"这些学生已经为运动会准备了好几个星期,他们希望在比赛中表现好一些",可知这里应该用and表示并列,并没有转折的意思.
5.opened改为opening;考查固定短语,opening ceremony是固定搭配,意为"开幕式".
6.very改为so;考查固定句式,这里用so与后面的that构成"so…that"结构,意为"如此…以至于".
7.cheered改为cheering;考查分词作状语,句子的主语A lot of students 与动词cheer是主谓关系,故用现在分词形式作状语.
8.my改为their;考查形容词性物主代词,结合语境分析,此处的物主代词应与句子的主语they保持一致,故用their.
9.去掉was;考查动词,last意为此处"持续;维持",是不及物动词,不用于被动语态,故把was去掉.
10.great前面加a;考查冠词,success在这里用作可数名词,意为"成功的人或事",前面加a泛指"一个".