[解析]
Yesterday I buy a new coat in a shop,and I found it was too big for me.This morning,I went to the shop and change the coat I bought yesterday.But the salesgirl treated me cold.Firstly,she didn't admit that I buy the coat in her shop.Then,she said I made it be dirty. So I got very angry and quarreled with him,pointing to the rules on the wall.Just then,∧manager turned up.He said sorry to me.At last they changed other one for me.Then I said good﹣bye to them and took the new coat home happy.
详解:
1.buy改为bought 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
2.and改为but 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是转折关系而非并列关系,用连词but.
3.change改为changed 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
4.cold改为coldly 考查副词.treat是动词,要用副词修饰.
5.buy改为bought 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
6.去掉be 考查句子结构.在"make sb./sth.adj."结构中,用形容词作宾语补足语,不需要be动词.
7.him改为her 考查代词.her指代前文提到的the salesgirl.
8.加the 考查冠词.manager前加定冠词the表示特指.
9.other改为another 考查形容词.other意为"其他的;别的",another意为"(人,事物)又一个的,再一个的",此处应是后者.
10.happy改为happily 考查副词.take是动词,要用副词修饰.