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Dear Peter,
Our school is planning to hold a Music Festival next month.I will take a speech on the America country music in the Music Festival,which is to last for one hour or so.【高分句型一】(交代书信背景) I have written a few drafts,but none of them satisfy me.As a result,I would like you to give me a hand.【高分句型二】Please help me to correct my draft and give me some suggestions about the content of the speech.In addition,could you provide some material about the America country music,such as its history,changes,styles and famous singers.(提出修改草稿,就讲座的内容提出他的建议以及提供与美国乡村音乐有关的资料的请求)
I will appreciate it if you can reply before 25th October.(交代回复时间,并且表示感谢)
Yours,
Li Hua