[答案]
Hi,Lisa,
ThisisDingZhen.LearningfromyourpostthatyouwanttoimproveyourMandarin,IwouldliketohelpyouwithyourMandarinlearning.
AsaChinesestudent,mybiggestadvantageisthatI'vebeenabroadcasterinschoolforyears,whichequipsmewithanoutstandinglanguageproficiency.WhenitcomestohowtospeakfluentMandarin,IsuggestthatyougetyourselfinvolvedinChineselearningactivities,suchasexploringChineseculture,gettingtoknowliteratureandhistoryetc.Believeme,theyaresuretoarouseyourinterestandstrengthenyourconfidence.Anothersuggestionistopracticelisteningandspeaking.Whatabouthalfanhouronlinevideochatwithmeeveryafternoon?I'mrightherereadytohelp.Doremember,learninganylanguageishardwork,butyoucanmakeit!
I'dappreciateitifyoucouldoffermethechance.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yourssincerely,
DingZhen
[解析]
Hi,Lisa,
This is Ding Zhen.Learning from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin,I would like to help you with your Mandarin learning.(书信目的)
As a Chinese student,my biggest advantage is that I've been a broadcaster in school for years,which equips me with an outstanding language proficiency.【高分句型一】(相关个人信息) When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin,I suggest that you get yourself involved in Chinese learning activities,such as exploring Chinese culture,getting to know literature and history etc. 【高分句型二】Believe me ,they are sure to arouse your interest and strengthen your confidence.Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking.What about half an hour online video chat with me every afternoon?I'm right here ready to help.Do remember,learning any language is hard work,but you can make it!(具体提高建议)
I'd appreciate it if you could offer me the chance .Looking forward to your early reply.(期盼回复)
Yours sincerely,
Ding Zhen
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