[答案]
DearSir/Madam,
LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginthelibrary.Ifoundsomethingunpleasant.ForthatIamwritingtoshowmyviews,andhopeitwillhelpyoutoimprovetheserviceofthelibrary.
First,therearenotenoughnewbooksontheshelves,mostofwhicharenotpopulartoday.Second,somebooksarenotsortedinproperorder,whichmakesitdifficultforusreaderstofindwhatwewantquickly.Third,theassistantsdon'toffergoodservice.Theyarechattingwhilewearereadingquietly,whichmakesitdifficultforustoconcentrateonbooks.Moreover,thereissomethingwrongwithoneofthelightsaswellassomedesksandchairs.
Isuggestthatyoumakesomenecessarychangesasassoonaspossiblesothatthelibrarycanbenefitmorepeople.
Yours,
LiHua
[解析]
DearSir/Madam,
Last Sunday,I went to do some reading in the library.I found something unpleasant.For that I am writing to show my views,and hope it will help you to improve the service of the library.(写信目的)
First,there are not enough new books on the shelves,most of which are not popular today.【高分句型一】(新书太少)Second,some books are not sorted in proper order,which makes it difficult for us readers to find what we want quickly.(书架上的书比较混乱)Third,the assistants don't offer good service.They are chatting while we are reading quietly,which makes it difficult for us to concentrate on books.(管理员工作时彼此闲聊,读者无法安心看书)Moreover,there is something wrong with one of the lights as well as some desks and chairs.(阅览室的一盏灯坏了,桌椅有些也被损坏)
I suggest that you make some necessary changes as as soon as possible so that the library can benefit more people.【高分句型二】(提出建议)
Yours,
LiHua
[点评]
本题考查了"提纲作文,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。