[解析]
I will never forget that at the age of 12 I was asked to deliver a speech entitled An Unforgettable Experience before the whole class! How terrible shy I was the moment I thought of that. I had no choice but∧ prepare for it, though. First, I drafted the speech, which was easy. But the hardest part lies in my oral presentation. The real moment began as I stood on the platform with my legs trembled and my mind blank. But my listener were waiting patiently. Gradually I found myself back, giving out my speech fluently. After which seemed to be ages, I found my audience applauding. I made it! From then on, my fear disappeared. Actually with your confidence building up, I now turn out to be the great speaker. Looking at back, I know the greatest difficulty on the way to success is fear. Overcome it, or you will be able to achieve your goals.
详解:
1.terrible改为terribly,考查副词,修饰形容词,所以用副词.
2.prepare前加to,考查固定搭配,have no choice but to do sth除了做某事别无选择.
3.lies改为lay,考查时态,描述过去的事情,所以用一般过去时态,lie的过去式为lay.
4.trembled改为trembling,考查with复合结构,with的宾语和tremble之间是主动关系,所以用现在分词作宾补.
5.listener改为listeners,考查名词的数,listener是可数名词,所以用复数泛指.
6.which改为what,考查宾语从句,在从句中做主语,表示"…的时间",用what引导,which意思是"哪一个".
7.your改为my,考查人称代词,指我的自信,所以用my泛指名词前面.
8.the改为a,考查冠词,泛指一个,所以用不定冠词.
9.删除at,考查介词,后面没有宾语,所以不用介词at.
10.or改为and,考查连词,根据句意"克服它,你就能实现你的目标",可知用祈使句+and句型.