假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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201945. （2023•西安四十八中•一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Life without a hobby is like food without salt.I have various hobby like drawing，gardening，photography and reading，among that my favorite hobby is reading.It is no doubt that reading is of much benefit to me in many ways.First of all，reading makes me feeling happy and relaxed，especial when I'm tired from my schoolwork.Therefore，reading was a perfect way to spend my spare time.What's the more，reading broadens my horizons but enriches my life as well.Apart from these，it is reading that allows me obtain courage，kindness and confidence，making me a better person.Let's form the habit of reading and benefit from them.

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日常生活，说明文，

[答案]

1.hobby

改为

hobbies

2.that

改为

which

3.It

改为

There

4.feeling

改为

feel

5.especial

改为

especially

6.was

改为

去掉

the

8.but

改为

and

9.obtain

前加

10.them

改为

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Life without a hobby is like food without salt.I have various hobby like drawing，gardening，photography and reading，among that my favorite hobby is reading.It is no doubt that reading is of much benefit to me in many ways.First of all，reading makes me feeling happy and relaxed，especial when I'm tired from my schoolwork.Therefore，reading was a perfect way to spend my spare time.What's ~~the~~ more，reading broadens my horizons but enriches my life as well.Apart from these，it is reading that allows me∧ obtain courage，kindness and confidence，making me a better person.Let's form the habit of reading and benefit from them.
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1.考查可数名词的复数。句意：我有各种各样的爱好，如绘画、园艺、摄影和阅读，其中一个我最喜欢的爱好是阅读。hobby是可数名词，由various修饰用复数，故将hobby改为hobbies。
2.考查非限制性定语从句。句意：我有各种各样的爱好，如绘画、园艺、摄影和阅读，其中一个我最喜欢的爱好是阅读。分析句子可知，"among that my favorite hobby is reading"是非限制性定语从句，修饰hobbies，从句中作介词among的宾语，指物，用关系代词which，故将that改为which。
3.考查固定句型。句意：毫无疑问，阅读在很多方面对我有很大的好处。There is no doubt that…"毫无疑问……"是固定句型，用形式主语there，故将It改为There。
4.考查动词不定式。句意：首先，阅读会让我感到快乐和放松，尤其是当我的作业累了的时候。分析句子可知，feel作宾语补足语，make后接不带to的不定式作宾语补足语，故将feeling改为feel。
5.考查副词。句意：首先，阅读会让我感到快乐和放松，尤其是当我的作业累了的时候。修饰状语从句用副词作状语，故将especial改为especially。
6.考查动词时态和主谓一致。句意：因此，阅读是一种让我度过业余时间的完美方式。文章主时态是一般现在时，主语是动名词reading，谓语用第三人称单数形式，故将was改为is。
7.考查固定短语。句意：并且，阅读拓宽了我的视野，也丰富了我的生活。What's more是固定短语，故去掉the。
8.考查连词。句意：并且，阅读拓宽了我的视野，也丰富了我的生活。前后文是并列关系，不是转折关系，故将but改为and。
9.考查动词不定式。句意：除此之外，是阅读让我获得勇气、善良和信心，使我成为一个更好的人。allow sb.to do sth."允许某人做某事"，用不定式作宾语补足语，故obtain前加to。
10.考查代词。句意：让我们养成阅读的习惯，并从中受益。根据句意，表示从阅读中收益，用单数代词it作宾语，故将them改为it。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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注意：
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
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共享时间:2020-07-11 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
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注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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共享时间:2021-07-12 难度:2 相似度:1

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204890. （2022•长安区一中•高二上期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jason，
    I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Students' Union.On behalf of the students，I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for invite us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week.To get further information，I'm writing to make some inquiries concerning an event.
    Firstly，I'm wondering when the event was scheduled to start so that we can apply to visas and book air tickets in advance.Also，I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week，because the information can help you make better preparation and promote our participation.Lastly，could you please to tell us what type of accommodation（s） will provided？If possible，we hope to stay in the school dormitory，where will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.
    Thanks again for your kind invitation.It would be high appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

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204814. （2022•周至四中•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning，when I looked out of the window，I excited found it was snowing heavily.Attracting by the beautiful sight，I decided to go out to take some photo.The snow finally stopped at noon，and I couldn't wait go outside with my camera.As I walked on the path in front of our building，I see a boy suddenly slip on the snow-covered ground.It was at that moment when I realized what I should do.Immediately，I ran back home to get a broom but started to sweep the path.I worked such hard that I sweated a lot of.An hour later，the thick snow was cleared away.Looking at the clean path，my neighbors both smiled and gave me thumbs up.I felt happy that I did something for my neighborhood.

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