假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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201735. （2024•西安中学•一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
   Nowadays，we can see phubbers watching their mobile phones everywhere.They can' t stop sending messages，surfing the Internet，listening music and even taking photos by using the mobile phone.
   Actually，phubbing disturbs not only our study and our life.On the one hand，phubbers waste plenty of time play cell phone games and sending message，particularly in the class.On the other，using the mobile phone for a long time can lead to healthy problems.
   As far as I am concerned，it is high time that we put down the mobile phone and raise our heads up.Do cherish that is around us and appreciate the sceneries ahead of us.Only when we use the mobile phone reasonable，can you realize the happiness of life.

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日常生活，议论文，

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在

listening

后加

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2.and

改为

but

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3.play

改为

playing

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删除

the

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5.healthy

改为

health

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6.raise

改为

raised

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7.that

改为

what

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8.sceneries

改为

scenery

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9.reasonable

改为

reasonably

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10.you

改为

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Nowadays，we can see phubbers watching their mobile phones everywhere.They can' t stop sending messages，surfing the Internet，listening ∧ music and even taking photos by using the mobile phone.
Actually，phubbing disturbs not only our study and our life.On the one hand，phubbers waste plenty of time play cell phone games and sending message，particularly in ~~the~~ class.On the other，using the mobile phone for a long time can lead to healthy problems.
As far as I am concerned，it is high time that we put down the mobile phone and raise our heads up.Do cherish that is around us and appreciate the sceneries ahead of us.Only when we use the mobile phone reasonable，can you realize the happiness of life.
1.考查介词。句意：他们无法停止使用手机发送信息、上网、听音乐或者拍照。listen"听"是不及物动词，后接宾语时要用listen to。故在listening后加to。
2.考查连词。句意：事实上，低头症不仅干扰了我们的学习，也影响了我们的生活。not only…but （also）…"不仅……而且……"。故and改为but。
3.考查动名词。句意：一方面，学生们浪费大量时间玩手机游戏和发送信息，尤其是在课堂上。waste time （in） doing sth. "浪费时间做某事"，因此这里应用动名词作宾语。故play改为playing。
4.考查固定短语。句意：一方面，学生们浪费大量时间玩手机游戏和发送信息，尤其是在课堂上。固定短语in class"在课堂中"。故删除the。
5.考查名词。句意：另一方面，长时间使用手机会导致健康问题。固定短语health problems"健康问题"。故healthy改为health。
6.考查虚拟语气。句意：就我而言，是时候放下手机，抬起头来了。It is （high） time that后面的从句谓语动词要用过去式。结合语境可知，此处应用过去式与and前面的put并列作从句谓语。故raise为raised。
7.考查宾语从句连接词。句意：珍惜我们身边的一切，欣赏我们面前的风景。分析可知，此处引导宾语从句，从句缺少主语，指事物，应用连接代词what引导。故that改为what。
8.考查不可数名词。句意：珍惜我们身边的一切，欣赏我们面前的风景。scenery"风景"是不可数名词。故sceneries改为scenery。
9.考查副词。句意：只有当我们合理地使用手机时，我们才能意识到生活的幸福。修饰动词use应用副词作状语。故reasonable改为reasonably。
10.考查代词。句意：只有当我们合理地使用手机时，我们才能意识到生活的幸福。根据语境及前文we可知，此处表示"我们"。故you改为we。

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注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。?
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215333. （2015•七十中•高一上期中）下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_），并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you don't have self-confidence．The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make the friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next，trying talking with a student who is ay as you or who share the same interest with you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate，and you can also talk about your hobbies as well．Unless someone is in trouble，you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence，you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours，
Lily．

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