[答案]
1.takes改为took;2.and改为but;3.end前加an;4.删除was;5.At改为On;6.nobody改为everybody;7.Checked改为Checking;8.second改为seconds;9.good改为well;10.Happy改为Happily.
[解析]
On June 7,my cousin takes the college entrance examination.The whole family were anxious and pretended to be calm.As soon as the important examination came to ∧end,my cousin took part in a big party with his classmates.It seemed that a big burden was removed.Then was followed a long wait for the results.At the night of the announcement of the results,nobody seemed to be restless.Checked the score online,he held his breath and closed his eyes for several second.To his relief,he did good in the exam.Happy,he has been admitted to a famous university.
详解:
1.takes改为took.考查动词时态。句意:6月7日,我表弟参加高考。结合上下文可知,文章是描述过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。故takes改为took。
2.and改为but.考查连词。句意:全家都很焦虑,但都假装很平静。根据句意可知,这里应用but表转折含义。故and改为but。
3.end前加an.考查冠词。句意:重要的考试一结束,表弟就和同学们一起参加了一个盛大的聚会。come to an end"结束",固定短语。故end前加an。
4.删除was.考查语态。句意:然后是漫长的等待结果。follow在这里表示"在…后发生",是不及物动词,没有被动语态。故删除was。
5.At改为On.考查介词。句意:在公布结果的当晚,每个人都感到不安。具体到某一天的晚上应用介词on。故At改为On。
6.nobody改为everybody.考查代词。句意:在公布结果的当晚,每个人都感到不安。根据句意可知,此处是指"每个人",故应用everybody,nobody"没有人"不符合语境。故nobody改为everybody。
7.Checked改为Checking.考查现在分词。句意:在网上查看分数时,他屏住呼吸,甚至闭上了眼睛几秒钟。分析可知,此处为非谓语动词作状语,且check与且逻辑主语he为主谓关系,故应用现在分词做状语。故Checked改为Checking。
8.second改为seconds.考查可数名词复数。句意:在网上查看分数时,他屏住呼吸,甚至闭上了眼睛几秒钟。分析可知,second在这里意为"秒"是可数名词,结合前文修饰词several可知,此处应用其复数形式。故second改为seconds。
9.good改为well.考查副词。句意:令他宽慰的是,他考试考得很好。修饰动词did应用副词作状语。故good改为well。
10.Happy改为Happily.考查副词。句意:很高兴,他被一所著名的大学录取了。分析可知,此处应用副词作状语,修饰整个句子。故Happy改为Happily。
[点评]
本题考查了"人与自我,",属于"基础题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。