假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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218456. （2022•长安区一中•高二上二月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On previous birthdays，my family would give me gifts but invite me to eat outside.I thought there would be no different this year.I went home after school as usual.But when I stepped into the house，I was heard " Surprise!Happy Birthday！" All of my family and friends were there.My mom brought a birthday cake making by herself.I wouldn't forget that moments.I was extremely happily and almost cried.My father promised to take care the street cat I had mentioned.It is the best birthday gift we have ever had.My father's birthday was coming.I'm planning to make the wonderful birthday party for him.

共享时间:2022-12-16 难度:1

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人与自我，

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1.but改为and；2.different改为difference；3.删除was；4.making改为made；5.moments改为moment；6.happily改为happy；7.care后加of；8.；we改为I；9.was改为is10.the改为a.

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On previous birthdays，my family would give me gifts but invite me to eat outside.I thought there would be no different this year.I went home after school as usual.But when I stepped into the house，I ~~was~~ heard " Surprise!Happy Birthday！" All of my family and friends were there.My mom brought a birthday cake making by herself.I wouldn't forget that moments.I was extremely happily and almost cried.My father promised to take care∧ the street cat I had mentioned.It is the best birthday gift we have ever had.My father's birthday was coming.I'm planning to make the wonderful birthday party for him.
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1.but改为and.考查连词。句意：在以前的生日，我的家人会给我礼物，邀请我去外面吃饭。结合前后文语境可知，上下文为并列关系，应用连词and。故but改为and。
2.different改为difference.考查不可数名词。句意：我以为今年不会有什么不同。结合句意表示"没有什么不同"短语为no difference。故different改为difference。
3.删除was.考查语态。句意：但当我走进房子时，我听到"惊喜！生日快乐！"分析可知，主语I与动词hear之间为主动关系，应用主动语态。故删除was。
4.making改为made.查过去分词。句意：我妈妈带了一个自己做的生日蛋糕。分析可知，动词make与其逻辑主语a birthday cake构成被动关系，故应用过去分词作后置定语。故making改为made。
5.moments改为moment.考查可数名词单数。句意：我永远不会忘记那一刻。moment"片刻"是可数名词，结合语境及that可知，此处特指过生日的那一刻，应用其单数形式。故moments改为moment。
6.happily改为happy.考查形容词。句意：我高兴得几乎要哭了。分析可知，此处应用形容词happy作表语。故happily改为happy。
7.care后加of.考查介词。句意：我父亲答应照顾我提到的流浪猫。结合句意表示"照顾"应用固定短语take care of。故care后加of。
8.we改为I.考查代词。句意：这是我收到的最好的生日礼物。结合语境可知，此处指作者收到最好的生日礼物，应用代词I代指"我"。故we改为I。
9.was改为is.考查时态。句意：我爸爸的生日快到了。分析可知，此处为现在进行时表将来，主语my father's birthday为单数，be动词应用单数is。故was改为is。
10.the改为a.考查冠词。句意：我打算为他办一个精彩的生日派对。party"派对"是可数名词，结合语境可知，此处应用不定冠词泛指"一个派对"，且wonderful是发音以辅音音素开头的单词，故应用不定冠词a。故the改为a。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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共享时间:2022-02-21 难度:1 相似度:2

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共享时间:2017-05-12 难度:1 相似度:2

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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共享时间:2020-05-15 难度:1 相似度:2

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214705. （2017•西安中学•高三上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
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共享时间:2017-11-22 难度:1 相似度:2

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214792. （2017•铁一中学•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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共享时间:2017-11-14 难度:1 相似度:2

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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共享时间:2017-11-12 难度:1 相似度:2

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214879. （2017•高新一中•高一上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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共享时间:2017-11-14 难度:1 相似度:2

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215014. （2017•长安区一中•高一下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；．
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共享时间:2017-05-15 难度:1 相似度:2

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215090. （2017•七十中•高二下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号^，并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉
修改：在错的词的下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
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共享时间:2017-05-13 难度:1 相似度:2

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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共享时间:2020-11-27 难度:1 相似度:2

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共享时间:2016-05-24 难度:1 相似度:2

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共享时间:2015-11-28 难度:1 相似度:2

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3.错误类型不涉及单词拼写。
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共享时间:2023-12-15 难度:1 相似度:2

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219192. （2022•关山中学•高一下一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Some festivals are held honor the dead or to satisfy the ancestors，which might return either to help or to do harm.For the Japanese festival Obon，people should go to cleaning graves and light incense in memory of our ancestors.They also light lamps or play music because of they think that this will lead the ancestors back to earth.In Mexico，people celebrated the Day of the Dead in early November.On this importantly feast day，people eat food in the shape of skulls and cakes with "bones" on them.They offer food，flowers and gift to the dead.The Western holiday Halloween also had it's origin in old beliefs about the return of the spirits of dead people.

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