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Seventeen﹣year﹣old teenager，John Janson， honoured at the Lifesaver Awards last night in Rivertown in giving lifesaving first aid on his neighbor after a shocked knife attack．John was presented with his award at a ceremony which recognized the brave of ten people who had saved the life of another．John was studying in his room while he and his father had rushed outside，a man ran from the scene．They discovered that ，mother of three，had been stabbed repeated with the knife．She was lying in her front garden bleed very heavily． His hands had almost been cut off．
详解：
1．honoured前面加was，考查语态，句子缺少谓语，句子主语和honour之间是被动关系，所以用被动语态，描述过去，所以用一般过去时态．
2．in改为for，考查介词，表示"因为"，用介词for．
3．shocked改为shocking，考查词义辨析，表示"令人震惊的"，所以用shocking，shocked指人"震惊的"．
4．brave改为bravery，考查词性，作宾语，前面有the，所以用名词．
5．while改为when，考查固定句型，sb was doing sth when…某人正在做某事，这时．when从句常用一般过去时态．
6．去掉had，考查固定句型，sb was doing sth when…某人正在做某事，这时．when从句常用一般过去时态．
7．repeated改为repeatedly，考查副词，修饰动词用副词．
8．bleed改为bleeding，可知现在分词，句子主语和bleed之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词作伴随状语．
9．the改为a，考查冠词，泛指一个，所以用不定冠词．
10．His改为Her，考查人称代词，指Anne Slade，是个女的，所以用her放在名词前面．
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