[答案]
"God,howcouldyoudothistome!"hecried.Thecryofmiseryanddesperationechoedthroughtheairashefelltohisknees,tearsminglingwiththesaltyseawind.Hisprayerswereseeminglyunanswered,andnow,eventheshelterhehadpainstakinglyconstructedlayinruins.Thefirenotonlyconsumedthetangibleevidenceofhisperseverance,butalsothefragilehopethathadkepthimgoing...Inthedepthsofdespair,thesurvivorsleptrestlessly.Butasthefirstraysofdawnpaintedthesky,hewasawakenedbythesoundofashipthatwasapproachingtheisland.Disbeliefmingledwithhopeinhiswearyeyeswhenrescuersstoodbeforehim.Bewildered,heasked:"HowdidyouknowIwashere?"
Therescuersexplainedthattheyhadseenthesmokesignalfromtheburningshelter.Itdawnedonthesurvivorthatwhatseemedlikeatragedy,thelossofhismeagerpossessionsandshelter,hadunintentionallybecomeabeaconthatguidedtherescue.Asheboardedtheship,leavingtheislandbehind,thesurvivorlookedbackonelasttime.Theisland,nowfadingintothehorizon,aswellastheburntremainsoftheshelterstoodasthewitnessofhisperseverance.Theshipcarriedthesurvivortowardsanewchapterandthesurvivorcarriedwithhimafirmbeliefthatsometimeshopecouldemergefromtheashes,soit'scrucialnottoloseheartevenifinthedarkestmoments.
[解析]
"God,how could you do this to me!" he cried.The cry of misery and desperation echoed through the air as he fell to his knees,tears mingling with the salty sea wind.【高分句型一】His prayers were seemingly unanswered,and now,even the shelter he had painstakingly constructed lay in ruins.The fire not only consumed the tangible evidence of his perseverance,but also the fragile hope that had kept him going...In the depths of despair,the survivor slept restlessly.But as the first rays of dawn painted the sky,he was awakened by the sound of a ship that was approaching the island.Disbelief mingled with hope in his weary eyes when rescuers stood before him.Bewildered,he asked: "How did you know I was here?"(描写幸存者感到绝望,放弃了活下去的希望,结果第二天被船的声音吵醒)
The rescuers explained that they had seen the smoke signal from the burning shelter.It dawned on the survivor that what seemed like a tragedy,the loss of his meager possessions and shelter,had unintentionally become a beacon that guided the rescue.【高分句型二】As he boarded the ship,leaving the island behind,the survivor looked back one last time.The island,now fading into the horizon,as well as the burnt remains of the shelter stood as the witness of his perseverance.The ship carried the survivor towards a new chapter and the survivor carried with him a firm belief that sometimes hope could emerge from the ashes,so it's crucial not to lose heart even if in the darkest moments.(描写幸存者得救以及幸存者的感悟)
[点评]
本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"基础题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。