[答案]
Thenextmorning,everythingwouldchange.Vanessacametothehospital.Afterknowingaboutthewholesituation,shesaid,"Iwantyourpermission."ShewentontosaythatshewantedtostartaGoFundMeforus.AGoFundMeforme?Wouldmyprideallowthat?"It'snotforyou.It'sforhim."Withthosewisewordsfrommyall﹣knowingfriend,Igaveherthego﹣ahead.Withindays,wehadalmosttheentireamounttopayourdeductible.
Icouldnotbelievethefloodofloveandsupportthatcamefromsuchunexpectedplaces.AlotofpeoplewhosenamesIdon'tevenknowaresuddenlygivingusmoney.ThecollectivelovecomingthroughthatcomputerscreenwasafeelingIhadneverknown.Strangerswerehelpingusthroughthehardestthingwe'deverbeenthrough.Afterthatfirstdeductiblecrisiswasovercome,thingsstartedlookingupfinancially.Mysonwasapprovedforastate﹣basedinsuranceplanthatcoveredmostofhistreatmentsandmedicationsandheisgraduallyrecovering,too.Thekindnessofstrangerschangedourlives.
[解析]
The next morning,everything would change.Vanessa came to the hospital.After knowing about the whole situation,she said, "I want your permission." She went on to say that she wanted to start a Go Fund Me for us.A Go Fund Me for me?Would my pride allow that? "It's not for you.It's for him." With those wise words from my all﹣knowing friend,I gave her the go﹣ahead.Within days,we had almost the entire amount to pay our deductible.(描写了作者的朋友帮助作者想办法筹到了钱)
I could not believe the flood of love and support that came from such unexpected places.A lot of people whose names I don't even know are suddenly giving us money.【高分句型一】The collective love coming through that computer screen was a feeling I had never known.【高分句型二】Strangers were helping us through the hardest thing we'd ever been through.After that first deductible crisis was overcome,things started looking up financially.My son was approved for a state﹣based insurance plan that covered most of his treatments and medications and he is gradually recovering,too.The kindness of strangers changed our lives.(描写了作者筹到钱后的感受,并且儿子在治疗下逐渐的恢复)
[点评]
本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。