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Thenextday,wedecidedtovisitcousinMarcia.Onourarrival,Bengaveherawarmhug.WethenlistenedassherecalledJulioverfamilyalbums.Witheyeslingeringonthephotos,Benremainedquiet.Suddenlyhespottedasun﹣tanned,unfamiliaryoungJuli.Curious,helookedupatMarcia."Julilovedsportsbeforehebrokehislegsinanaccident."Sheexplained.Therecamealongsilence.ThenMarciaturnedtoBen,grabbedhishandsandsmiled,"Ben,youbroughtlaughterbacktoJuli'slife.Youwerehisbuddy,andahero."
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Beforeweleft,MarciatoldBenthatshehadsomethingspecialtogivehim.WhenBenwatchedMarciatakingoutawalkingstickfromawoodencase,hefirstlookedsurprised,thenhonored.Itwasadarkbrownstick,notveryold,butalreadyshowingwearandtear.ThankingMarcia,hereceivedthestickfromherhandswithabroadsmile.Marcia'swrinkledfacealsoblossomedintoasmile.Thenhetookthestickinhand,supportinghimselfwithitthewaythathe'dseenJulidocountlesstimes.Proudly,Benwalkedoutsideintothesunshine.
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The next day,we decided to visit cousin Marcia.On our arrival,Ben gave her a warm hug.We then listened as she recalled Juli over family albums.With eyes lingering on the photos,Ben remained quiet.【高分句型一】Suddenly he spotted a sun﹣tanned,unfamiliar young Juli.Curious,he looked up at Marcia. "Juli loved sports before he broke his legs in an accident." She explained.There came a long silence.Then Marcia turned to Ben,grabbed his hands and smiled,"Ben,you brought laughter back to Juli's life.You were his buddy,and a hero."(我带儿子去拜访表妹玛西娅时儿子与表妹一起回忆朱力的情景,以及彼此的反应)
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Before we left,Marcia told Ben that she had something special to give him.When Ben watched Marcia taking out a walking stick from a wooden case,he first looked surprised,then honored.It was a dark brown stick,not very old,but already showing wear and tear.Thanking Marcia,he received the stick from her hands with a broad smile.Marcia's wrinkled face also blossomed into a smile.Then he took the stick in hand,supporting himself with it the way that he'd seen Juli do countless times.【高分句型二】Proudly,Ben walked outside into the sunshine.(表妹送给儿子的礼物以及儿子收到礼物后的反应及表妹的反应)
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本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。