[解析]
Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work have made him very ill."He has ruined his healthy.We are worried about him."That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon.I paid∧visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
详解:
1.with改为on 考查介词.此处考查spend+时间+on 意为花费时间在…事情上.
2.去掉so 考查连接词.根据句式,with引导状语从句,所以后面为主句,去掉so.
3.have改为has 考查助动词.主语为hard work表示第三人称单数,所以用单数has made.
4.healthy改为health 考查名词.此处放在his后面需用名词.
5.which改为what 考查连接词.is后接一个表语从句,say缺少宾语,所以用what.
6.visit之前加a 考查冠词.此处考查固定短语 pay a visit to意为拜访某人.
7.her改为his 考查物主代词.根据句意,提到老师的房间,故用his.
8.step改为stepped 考查时态.通过上下文得知叙述过去的事情,所以用一般过去式.
9.picture改为pictures 考查名词单复数.picture为可数名词,前有some修饰所以用复数.
10.many改为much 此处表达意思为老师想念我们就像我们想念他一样.as much as 表示程度.