[解析]
After visited the Beijing Normal School,Madame Peng took Sasha and Malia,my mother,and I to the Forbidden City.It is located right ∧the heart of Beijing.As a name suggests,it is large enough to be a city of its own,which include nearly1,000 buildings and nearly 10,000 rooms.In 1925,it was turning into a museum so that visitors like us from all over the world can stroll through many of the beautiful room and outdoor space.It is far too larger to fully experience in a single visit.We only wish we had more time to see everything.And I'm not sure that whether there could ever be enough time to fully enjoy all of the art and history in this wonderful place.
1.visited改为visiting,考查动名词,介词after后面跟动名词.
2.I改为me.考查代词.此处用宾格me作take的宾语,take sb.to sp.
3.right后面加in.考查介词.此处表达:它位于北京的中心,因此要用介词in.
4.a改为the,考查冠词,特指用定冠词,前面已经出现,所以用the特指.
5.include改为includes.考查主谓一致.此次是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词是a city,因此从句谓语动词用单数形式.
6.turning改为turned,考查语态,句子主语和turn之间是被动关系,所以用过去分词和was构成被动语态.
7.room改为rooms.考查名词单复数.根据前面的many可知这里要有room的复数形式.
8.larger改为large.考查形容词.too…to…结构中要有形容词或副词的原级.
9.And改为But,考查连词,前后句子表示转折而不是并列.
10.去掉that.考查名词性从句引导词.此处是一个宾语从句,从句不缺少成分,但是需要翻译出"是否",因此要用whether来引导,that是多余的.