[解析]
Two men were traveling together while a bear suddenly met them．One of them climbed up into the tree．
The other，seeing that he must be attacked，immediate lay on his back on the ground．When the bear came
up，feeling him with his nose and smelt him all over，he held∧breath．The bear soon left him，for it's said
that a bear won't touchesa dead body．When he was gone，the other travelers went down from the tree．And he asked his friend thatthe bear had whispered to his ear．"He gave me a piece of advice，"his companion
replied．"Never to travel with a friend who deserts you in the face of danger．"
详解：
1．while改为when；考查连词，这里when是并列连词，意为"在这时"，while也可用作并列连词，但它表示对照关系，意为"而，却"，结合句意"两个人正在一起旅行，这时遇到了一只熊"可知此处应该用when．
2．the改为a；考查冠词，分析句意为"其中一个人爬上了一棵树"，所以此处用a泛指"一棵"．
3．immediate改为immediately；考查副词，此处用副词形式，在句中作状语．
4．feeling改为felt；考查并列成分，这里came，felt和smelt是并列成分，在句中并列作谓语，所以形式要保持一致，用一般过去时．
5．held breath中间加the；考查固定短语，hold one's breath是固定短语，意为"屏住呼吸"．
6．touches改为touch；考查动词，前面won't是情态动词，所以后面要跟动词原形touch．
7．travellers改为traveller；考查名词，the other意为"另一个"，后面跟名词的单数形式．
8．that改为what；考查宾语从句，分析句子结构得知这是一个宾语从句，这里用what作从句中动词whispered的宾语．
9．to改为in；考查习语搭配，whisper in one's ear是固定短语搭配，意为"对某人耳语"．
10．去掉to；考查句式结构，分析句子可知这是一个祈使句，要以动词原形开头，故去掉to．
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