假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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205027. （2022•莲湖区•高一下期末）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are a small shop near our school and the boss is a very nice person.Last week，I went to thiop and buy something to eat after school.Therefore，I found I didn't have enough money.The boss obvious realized my problem and asked me to pay the rest another time.Watched his smile，I felt so shocked by his kindness.She didn't know me，and even if I did not return the money，he wouldn't remembered me.But I had to keep my word.When I got home，I wrote down the amount of money I should pay remind myself.The next day，I returned the moneys and felt very happy because of I passed an important test in my life.

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人与自我，

[答案]

1.are

改为

；

2.buy

改为

bought

；

3.Therefore

改为

However

；

4.obvious

改为

obviously

；

5.watched

改为

watching

；

6.She

改为

；

7.remembered

改为

remember

；

在

remind

前加

；

9.moneys

改为

money

；

10.

去掉

of.

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There are a small shop near our school and the boss is a very nice person.Last week，I went to this shop and buy something to eat after school.Therefore，I found I didn't have enough money.The boss obvious realized my problem and asked me to pay the rest another time.Watched his smile，I felt so shocked by his kindness.She didn't know me，and even if I did not return the money，he wouldn't remembered me.But I had to keep my word.When I got home，I wrote down the amount of money I should pay ∧remind myself.The next day，I returned the moneys and felt very happy because of I passed an important test in my life.
详解：
1.are改为is.考查主谓一致。句意：我们学校附近有一家小商店，老板是个很好的人。主语the boss为单数，be动词应用is。故are改为is。
2.buy改为bought.考查时态。句意：上周，放学后我去这家商店买东西吃。根据时间状语last week以及并列谓语went可知，此处应用一般过去时。故buy改为bought。
3.Therefore改为However.考查副词。句意：然而，我发现我没有足够的钱。根据句意可知，上下文之间为转折关系，而不是因果关系。故Therefore改为However。
4.obvious改为obviously.考查副词。句意：老板显然意识到了我的问题，他让我下次再付其余的钱。修饰动词realized应用副词。故obvious改为obviously。
5.watched改为watching.考查现在分词。句意：看着他的笑容，我为他的善良感到震惊。句中动词watch与其逻辑主语I之间是主谓关系，应用现在分词形式作状语。故watched改为watching。
6.She改为He.考查代词。句意：他不认识我，即使我不还钱，他也不会记得我。根据上文his smile可知，老板是男性而不是女性，所以应用代词he来代指。故She改为He。
7.remembered改为remember.考查动词原形。句意：他不认识我，即使我不还钱，他也不会记得我。情态动词wouldn't之后应用动词原形。故remembered改为remember。
8.在remind前加to.考查动词不定式。句意：当我回到家的时候，我记下了我应该付的钱来提醒自己。结合语境可知，此处应用to do不定式作目的状语，故在remind前加to。
9.moneys改为money.考查可数名词复数。句意：第二天，我把钱还给了他，我感到非常高兴，因为我通过了人生中重要的一场考试。money"钱"为不可数名词，无复数，故moneys改为money。
10.去掉of.考查连词。句意：第二天，我还了钱，我感到非常高兴，因为我通过了人生中一个重要的考试。分析可知，这里应用连词because引导原因状语从句，because of后通常接名词及名词短语。故去掉of。

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本题考查了"人与自我，"，属于"常考题"，熟悉题型是解题的关键。

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