[解析]
After school,I was about to enter into my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin.He looked extremely weak.Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy.So I decided to take him home.I gave him some food and a bath.After the bath he looked energy and refreshed.What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home,I asked that I could keep the dog.To my surprised and joy,they agreed.Up to now,he has become∧member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company.Looked at the cute and happy dog today,I realize that it was right to help him.I offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
详解:
1.去掉into;考查介词,enter本身具有"进入"的意思,后面直接跟宾语.
2.lie改为lying;考查非谓语动词,a little dirty dog和动词lie存在逻辑上的主谓关系,故用现在分词形式作宾语dog的补足语.
3.of改为with;考查介词,fill sb with sth 使固定搭配,意为"用…把…填满".
4.energy改为energetic;考查形容词,此处用形容词形式与后面的refreshed并列作looked的表语.
5.that改为if/whether;考查宾语从句,结合上下文分析此处要用if/whether引导宾语从句,意为"我问我是否可以收养这条狗".
6.surprised改为surprise;考查固定短语,to one's surprise 是固定搭配,意为"使某人吃惊的是…".
7.member前面加a;考查冠词,member是可数名词的单数形式,前面加a泛指"一个".
8.had改为has;考查动词的时态,根据时间状语Up to now(直到现在)可知要用现在完成时,故把had改为has.
9.Looked改为Looking;考查分词作状语,主语I和动词look之间是主谓关系,故用现在分词形式作状语.
10.ourselves改为us;考查人称代词,此处用宾格形式us作brought的宾语,意为"他给我们带来很多快乐和欢笑".