[答案]
DearLily,
Ifeelsorryandwouldliketoofferyousomeadvicewhenhearingthatyouarefeelingsadnow.
Firstofall,Irecommendthatyoufindachancetohaveaface﹣to﹣facetalkwithyourmother,whichwillhelpyoutwounderstandeachother.Secondly,you'dbettertryyourbesttoworkhardandbalanceyourlessonsandphysicalhealth,andinthatcaseyourmotherwillhaveconfidenceinyou.Thirdly,tellyourmotherthatyouhavegrownupandcandealwithsomethingsonyourownandadvisehernottobeconcernedaboutyou.Inaddition,it'sagoodideatotellherthatyouareeagertobeindependentandeagerformorefreedom.
Hopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.
Yours,
LiHua
[解析]
Dear Lily,
I feel sorry and would like to offer you some advice when hearing that you are feeling sad now.(点明主题)
First of all,I recommend that you find a chance to have a face﹣to﹣face talk with your mother,which will help you two understand each other.【高分句型一】(找机会和妈妈谈一谈)Secondly,you'd better try your best to work hard and balance your lessons and physical health,and in that case your mother will have confidence in you.(认真学习,好好锻炼身体,让妈妈放心)Thirdly,tell your mother that you have grown up and can deal with some things on your own and advise her not to be concerned about you.In addition,it's a good idea to tell her that you are eager to be independent and eager for more freedom.【高分句型二】(和妈妈说明:自己长大了,希望能有足够的自由)
Hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.(表达希望)
Yours,
Li Hua
[点评]
本题考查了"提纲作文,",属于"基础题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。