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DearTina,
Thatsoundsextremelyfrustrating.Idoagreethatschoolisimportant.Butitshouldn'tbeeverything.Yourmomwantsthebestforyou,butsheshouldknowthatasyougetolder,youwillbeultimatelyoutofherhands.So,actuallyallshecandonowistrytoprepareyouforthefuture.
Isuggestyoufirstcommunicatewithyourmomrespectfullyandtellherthatyouareawareofherconcerns.Youcanalsobemoreopenwithheraboutyourschoolwork.Keepherinformedofwhat'sgoingoninyourclasses,whatassignmentsyou'reworkingonandwhattestsarecomingup.Last,doreassureherthatyouarearesponsibleandcaringdaughterbyrelievingherofsomehouseholdchores.
Youdon'twanttoburnoutandexhaustyourself.Therearemorethingstolife,andthesethingsaretherewardsforworkinghard.Keepgoing!
Bestwishes,
LiHua
[解析]
Dear Tina,
That sounds extremely frustrating. I do agree that school is important. But it shouldn't be everything. Your mom wants the best for you, but she should know that as you get older, you will be ultimately out of her hands. 【高分句型一】So, actually all she can do now is try to prepare you for the future.(表示理解)
I suggest you first communicate with your mom respectfully and tell her that you are aware of her concerns. You can also be more open with her about your schoolwork. Keep her informed of what's going on in your classes, what assignments you're working on and what tests are coming up. Last, do reassure her that you are a responsible and caring daughter by relieving her of some household chores.【高分句型二】(提供帮助)
You don't want to burn out and exhaust yourself. There are more things to life, and these things are the rewards for working hard. Keep going!(表达支持)
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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