[答案]
(1)week→week's(2)you→I (3)SpringFestival前面加the(4)comfortably→comfortable(5)had→have(6)homeworks→homework(7)which→who/that(8)dealing→deal(9)for去掉 (10)appreciate→appreciated
[解析]
I'd like to hand in my request for one week vacation that will run from January 23 to 29.My family and you would like to spend∧ Spring Festival holiday back to Beijing.We need to start making arrangements now in order to make the trip as comfortably as possible.For my vacation,I had already completed all the required homeworks.I have also discussed my vacation with my friend Zhang Hua which is more than willing to dealing with any unexpected incident for me when I am away.You can call for him at 445﹣2322 if necessary.
Your response to this issue would be greatly appreciate.
解析:
(1)week→week's.考查名词所有格.句意:我想提交一周假期的申请.这里表示一周的假期,one week 是vacation的定语,这里缺少"的",所以用名词所有格.故将week改成week's.
(2)you→I.考查人称代词.句意:我和我的家人想回北京过春节假期.这里需要度假的是我和我的家人,所以应该用第一人称.故将you改成I.
(3)Spring Festival.前面加the考查冠词.句意:我和我的家人想回北京过春节假期.春节Spring Festival是节日,这里特指今年的春节,需要在节日面前加the.故Spring Festival 前面加the.
(4)comfortably→comfortable.考查形容词.句意:我们现在需要开始安排,以便使旅行尽可能舒适.make sth +adj.,表示使某物怎么样,这里comfortable需要用形容词.故将comfortably改成comfortable.
(5)had→have.考查不可数名词.句意:我已经完成了所有要求的家庭作业.homework是不可数名词,不能加s,故将homeworks改成homework.
(6)homeworks→homework.考查时态.句意:对于我的假期,我已经完成了所有要求的家庭作业.这里表示过去发生的事情对现在的影响,用现在完成时.故将had改成have.
(7)which→who/that.考查定语从句.句意:我还和我的朋友张华讨论了我的假期,他非常愿意在我不在的时候为我处理任何意外事件。本句为定语从句,先行词是my friend Zhang Hua,先行词是人,先行词在从句中做主语成分,连接词应该用who或者that.故将which改成who/that.
(8)dealing→deal.考查动词原形.句意:我还和我的朋友张华讨论了我的假期,他非常愿意在我不在的时候为我处理任何意外事件,be willing to do sth表示乐意做做某事,所以这里应该用动词原形.故将dealing 改成deal.
(9)去掉for.考查固定搭配.句意:如果需要,你可以打电话445﹣2322找他..call sb 表示给某人打电话,是固定搭配.故将for去掉.
(10)appreciate→appreciated.考查被动语态.句意:我将会深深感激你的回复.这里主语是your response,主语和动词appreciate 之间的关系是被动关系,所以需要用被动语态,这里appreciate 需要用过去分词形式appreciated,故将appreciate改成appreciated.
[点评]
本题考查了"人与自我,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。