[答案]
DearDavid，
Howareyou？Iwritetotellyoumyconcernsaboutsomeofyourunhealthyhabits．Idon'tmeantoupsetyou，butIreallycareaboutyou．
David，Ifoundthatyoupickedoutallthevegetableswhenhavingdinersandyoulovedthejunkfoodcrazily．Besides，yourefusedtoclimbthemountainwithme，becauseyouthoughtyouwouldbeoutofbreathifdoingso．Butahealthybodyisthebasisofasuccessfullife．Idowishyoucantrysomefreshvegetables．Inaddition，Iwantyoutogetinvolvedinsomephysicalexerciseregularly，whichwillhelpyouimproveyourphysicalhealth．
Lookingforwardtoseeingyourprogress．
Bestwishes．
Yours，
LiHua
[解析]
Dear David，
How are you？I write to tell you my concerns about some of your unhealthy habits．I don't mean to upset you，but I really care about you．（写信目的）
David，I found that you picked out all the vegetables when having diners and you loved the junk food crazily．Besides，you refused to climb the mountain with me ，because you thought you would be out of breath if doing so． 【高分句型一】（他的不良习惯）But a healthy body is the basis of a successful life．I do wish you can try some fresh vegetables． 【高分句型二】In addition，I want you to get involved in some physical exercise regularly，which will help you improve your physical health．（你的建议）
Looking forward to seeing your progress．（盼望）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua
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本题考查了"提纲作文，身心健康，"，属于"必考题"，熟悉题型是解题的关键。
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