[答案]
Whenitcomestothequalitieswhichdeterminesuccess,somepeopleassumethatsuccessrequiresfortune,willpowerandsoon.However,Iinsistpatienceisthemostimportant.
AsfarasIcanremember,ItookuprunningtoloseweightwhenIwasyoung.Butafteramonth,Istartedtogetimpatient.Thankfully,myfatherpushedmetobemorepatient.Iacceptedhisadvice,gotbackontrackandcarrieditthrough.Gradually,Ibecamefitter.
Lookingback,IwouldhaveendedupnowhereifIhadlostpatienceandgivenuphalfway.It'spatiencethatmakesagreatdifferenceintheend.
[解析]
When it comes to the qualities which determine success,some people assume that success requires fortune,willpower and so on.【高分句型一】However,I insist patience is the most important.(你的观点)
As far as I can remember,I took up running to lose weight when I was young.But after a month,I started to get impatient.Thankfully,my father pushed me to be more patient.I accepted his advice,got back on track and carried it through.Gradually,I became fitter.(举例说明)
Looking back,I would have ended up nowhere if I had lost patience and given up halfway.It's patience that makes a great difference in the end.【高分句型二】(总结)
[点评]
本题考查了"其他应用文写作,提纲作文,生活感悟,",属于"难典题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。