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Thank you for your letter,what really made me happy.I'm glad to know that you've come ∧China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.I'm surely you'll have a good time.Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice.Luckily,I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.Then I can spare some time to learn it again,such that we can practice together on every day.Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China.See you sooner.
详解:
1.what改为which.考查定语从句.句意:谢谢你的来信,这真的让我很高兴.此处是非限制性定语从句,不能用what连接,关系词指代前面句子在从句中作主语,应用关系代词which,故将what改为which.
2.China前加to.考查介词.句意:得知你来中国在我家乡的一所学校学习功夫我很高兴.come是不及物动词,表示"来到某地"时需加介词to,故在China前加to.
3.surely改为sure.考查形容词.句意:我相信你一定会玩得很开心.此处应用形容词sure作表语,I'm sure (that)"我相信",故将surely改为sure.
4.start改为started.考查动词时态.句意:实际上,我七岁时就开始学功夫了,但是我已经很久没有练习了.根据时间状语when I was seven years old,主句谓语动词应用一般过去时,故将start改为started.
5.for改为but/yet.考查连词.句意:实际上,我七岁时就开始学功夫了,但是我已经很久没有练习了.前后句之间表达转折关系,而不是因果关系,应用连词but或yet连接,故将for改为but/yet.
6.vacations改为vacation.考查名词的数.句意:幸运的是,两周后我将回家过暑假.vacation"假期",指的是整个的放假时间.所以一般用单数形式,故将vacations改为vacation.
7.such改为so.考查状语从句.句意:然后我可以抽出时间再学一次,这样我们就可以每天一起练习了.so that"以便",引导目的状语从句,故将such改为so.
8.去掉on.考查介词.句意:名词day前面有every修饰,不需要加介词,故去掉on.
9.yours改为your.考查人称代词.句意:yours是名词性物主代词,相当于"your+名词",而此处修饰动名词短语learning kung fu,应用形容词性物主代词,故将yours改为your.
10.sooner改为soon.考查副词.句意:期待很快与您见面.sooner是soon 的比较级,而本句没有比较的对象,只表达"期待很快与您见面"之意,应用原级soon,故将sooner改为soon.