[解析]
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted∧teach me about
to
animals,insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
came
One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My
having
uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.
immediately at None
Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky-they were looked like rain!We ran to escape but
were 删除were或looked and
fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn't learn much about animals,insects or trees,but I learnt a impressive lesson about
an
gravity!
1.wanted后面加to 考查动词不定式. 固定搭配want to do sth想要做某事;to是不能省略的,不定式to do sth作为want的宾语.
2.come改为came 考查时态. 根据本文第一句可知讲述的是过去发生的事情,所以使用一般过去时,所以使用came.
3.have改为having 考查非谓语动词. 本句中动词have与句子主语we构成逻辑上的主动关系,所以使用现在分词在句中做状语.
4.immediate改为immediately 考查形容词,副词的形式. 本句中应该使用副词immeately来修饰谓语动词jumped,在句中做状语.形容词immediate不能做状语.
5.on改为at 考查介词搭配. 固定搭配shoot..at…不能使用介词on.At表示瞄准的对方或者方向.
6.Neither改为none 考查代词. 代词neither表示两者都不…;而本句中没有提及两者,应该是有很多的鸟.故使用none表示三者或者三者以上的全部否定.
7.was改为were 考查主谓一致. 本句的主语是复数名词arrows,所以谓语动词使用复数形式were.
8 去掉were或者looked 考查语态. 本句是指箭如雨下,要么使用look like看起来像..;要么使用be like…像…一样.
9.but改为and 考查连词 我们四处逃跑,很幸运的是没有人受伤.根据上下文语境可知表示并列关系.
10.a改为an 考查冠词. 后面的形容词impressive是以元音开始的,所以使用an.