[答案]
Hello,everyone.Recently,ourclasshaveadiscussionaboutwhatwecandotomakehomeahappierplaceinourEnglishclass.Herearesomeofourideas.Somesayit'sagoodideatospendmoretimewithfamily.Theybelievefamilymembersshouldsharehappinessandworries.Whentheymeetproblems,wecandosomethingtocheerthemup.Homeisalwaysthefirstplaceforustogethelpandsupport.Othersthinkthatit'snecessarytorememberfamily'sbirthdaysandpreparesmallpresents.Thefeelingofbeinglovedcanbringusmorepleasure.Inmyopinion,showingloveforfamilyisreallyimportant.Sometimes,eventhesmallestthinglikewalkingwithfamilymakesthemhappier.Bylisteningattentivelyandofferingsupportwithoutjudgment,wecanfosteradeepersenseoftrustandlove.
[解析]
Hello,our class have a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place in our English class.Here are some of our ideas.(点明主题)
Some say it's a good idea to spend more time with family.They believe family members should share happiness and worries.When they meet problems
In my opinion,even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier.By listening attentively and offering support without judgment
[点评]
本题考查了"议论文   家庭生活   ",属于"易错题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。