[答案]
DearJack，
Iamsorrytohearthatyoufeelupsetaboutyourfriendsmoking．Don'tworry．Itislikelyforhimtostopsmokingaslongasheseesthetruth．
Smokingisquitearisk．Foronething，personally，smokingharmsone'shealth．Infact，itcontributestolungcancer，fromwhichmanypeoplehavedied．Foranother，scientificresearchshowsthatnotonlyissmokingharmfultosmokersthemselves，butalsoathreattopublichealth，especiallytowomenandchildren．
Herecomessomeadvicetohelpyourfriendbreakthehabit．Awarenesscomesfirst．Itisnotuntilherealizesthe seriousnessoftheproblemthathewillbecomementallypreparedtoquit．Moreover，takefirmaction．Postimageswithhorribleconsequencesofsmokingandsweepawayallthecigarettesaround．Withoutaccesstocigarettesdoeshelp．
Ihopemyadvicewillmakeadifference．Lookforwardtoyourgoodnews．
Yourssincerely，
LiHua
[解析]
Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you feel upset about your friend smoking． Don't worry． It is likely for him to stop smoking as long as he sees the truth．【高分句型一】（表示安慰 ）
Smoking is quite a risk． For one thing， personally， smoking harms one's health． In fact， it contributes to lung cancer， from which many people have died． For another， scientific research shows that not only is smoking harmful to smokers themselves， but also a threat to public health， especially to women and children．（吸烟的危害）
Here comes some advice to help your friend break the habit． Awareness comes first． It is not until he realizes the seriousness of the problem that he will become mentally prepared to quit．【高分句型二】 Moreover， take firm action． Post images with horrible consequences of smoking and sweep away all the cigarettes around． Without access to cigarettes does help．（如何戒烟）I hope my advice will make a difference． Look forward to your good news．（盼望）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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