[解析]
Last Saturday I took∧ bike trip to the nature park together with three of my friends in the breeze (微风), there we went for sighting. In the forest, we saw a number of plant and knew a lot about them. And then we go to a patch of grass that was full of wild flowers. We lay in the sun quietly, enjoyed the fresh air. The sight was very amazing that we didn't want to leave. We talked about our experiences happy and played several childhood games. Later, we had photos taken together and rode back to home.
It was really an unforgettable weekend because they learned a lot about plants. With addition, we relaxed ourselves by enjoying the beauty of nature
详解:
1. took后面加a,考查冠词,trip为可数名词,用不定冠词指一次.
2. there改为where,考查非限制性定语从句,先行词为park,在从句中作地点状语,所以用where引导.
3. plant改为plants,考查名词的数,plant为可数名词,前面有a number of修饰,所以用复数形式.
4. go改为went,考查时态,描述过去,用一般过去时态.
5. enjoyed考查现在分词,enjoy和句子主语之间是主动关系,所以用现在分词做伴随状语.
6. very改为so,考查固定搭配,so…that…,如此…以致于…
7. happy改为happily,考查副词,修饰动词,用副词.
8. 去掉to,考查介词,home为副词,前面不用介词.
9. they改为we,考查人称代词,指"我们",所以用we.
10. With 改为In,考查固定搭配,in addition另外.