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DearSirorMadam,
IamwritingtocomplainthatthebookIpurchasedinyouronlinebookshoponDoubleElevenShoppingCarnivalhassomeproblems.
IwasverygladtoreceiveabookGonewiththeWindyesterday.However,whenIopenedthepackage,Ifoundthecoverofthenovelisbrokenandtherearesomedirtyspotsonitduetothepoorpackaging.Inaddition,somepagesaremissing,makingitimpossibletoread.
Iwouldlikeyoutochangeitforanewoneandpostittomeassoonaspossible.Pleasedocheckthebookandbecarefulwiththepackagingbeforehandthistime.Ihopeyoucanliveuptotheexpectationofyourcustomer.
Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours,
LiHua
[解析]
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain that the book I purchased in your online bookshop on Double Eleven Shopping Carnival has some problems.(点明目的)
I was very glad to receive a book Gone with the Wind yesterday.However,when I opened the package,I found the cover of the novel is broken and there are some dirty spots on it due to the poor packaging.In addition,some pages are missing,making it impossible to read.【高分句型一】(包装不完善导致封面有破损和污渍,书有缺页)
I would like you to change it for a new one and post it to me as soon as possible.Please do check the book and be careful with the packaging beforehand this time.【高分句型二】I hope you can live up to the expectation of your customer.(要求调换新书,尽快发货)
Looking forward to your early reply.(期盼回复)
Yours,
Li Hua
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本题考查了"提纲作文,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。