[答案]
DearJacky,
I'mterriblysorrythatyougetintotroubleingettingonwellwithyourfriends.Now,Ioffersometipstoyousothattheycanhelpyou.
First,youshouldlearntobeconcernedaboutyourfriendsandhelpthem,whichisveryimportant.Second,youdon'tignorethemwhenyoustaywiththem.Inparticular,youhadbetterhelpthemtosolvesomedifficultproblems.Finally,asfarasI'mconcerned,itisagoodideathatyoucancommunicatewithyourfriendsfacetoface.Lastbutnotleast,whentheyhelpyou,youshouldthankthem.
Hopemysuggestionswillbehelpful.
Yours,
LiHua
[解析]
Dear Jacky,
I'm terribly sorry that you get into trouble in getting on well with your friends.Now,I offer some tips to you so that they can help you.(写信目的)
First,you should learn to be concerned about your friends and help them,which is very important.【高分句型一】(学会关心、帮助朋友)Second,you don't ignore them when you stay with them.In particular,you had better help them to solve some difficult problems.(不能忽视朋友)Finally,as far as I'm concerned,it is a good idea that you can communicate with your friends face to face.【高分句型二】(会面对面交流)Last but not least,when they help you,you should thank them.(及时感谢)
Hope my suggestions will be helpful.(表达希望)
Yours,
Li Hua
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