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Dr.Mr.Smith,
I'mLiHua,astudentfromClassII,SeniorI.I'mwritingtodrawyourattentiontosomeimproperbehavioursamongusstudents.Nowadays,therearequiteafewstudentsputtingtheirleftovereverywhere,makingthedininghallinamess.
Iwonderiftheschoolcouldtakemeasurestosolvetheproblem.First,theschoolshouldencouragestudentstoformgoodhabitsbyputtingpostersaroundthehall,askingthemtobemorethoughtfuloftheirbehavioursandprotectourenvironment.Besides,anyonewhoisfounddroppinglittershouldbepunishedbymakingthemcleanupthedininghall.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveacleanandtidydininghallandenjoyourselvesthere.
Ihopeyou'lltakemyadviceintoconsideration.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
[解析]
Dr.Mr.Smith,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Class II,Senior I.I'm writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviours among us students.Nowadays,there are quite a few students putting their leftover everywhere,making the dining hall in a mess.(说明存在的问题)
I wonder if the school could take measures to solve the problem.【高分句型一】First,the school should encourage students to form good habits by putting posters around the hall,asking them to be more thoughtful of their behaviours and protect our environment.Besides,anyone who is found dropping litter should be punished by making them clean up the dining hall.【高分句型二】Only in this way can we have a clean and tidy dining hall and enjoy ourselves there.(提出整改建议)
I hope you'll take my advice into consideration.(期望采纳)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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本题考查了"提纲作文,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。