[答案]
DearJeff,
I'msorrytohearthatyouareaddictedtoshortvideosandlackinterestinlearning.I'mwritingtoofferyousomesuggestions.
Shortvideosdohavesomebenefits.Wecanreleasepressure,sharegoodtimes,cherishmemories,etc.However,inmyopinion,firstly,youshouldstrikeabalancebetweenleisureactivitiesandlearning.Onlyonthepremiseofself﹣consciousnesscanwebenefitfrommoderntechnologiesratherthanbeingslavesofsuchnewtechnologies.Youshouldfocusonstudy,anddon'twasteyourtimeondistractions.Secondly,youcanjoinyourfriendsinplayingvarioussportsactivities,whichincluderunning,cyclingorplayingbasketball,etc.
Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelpforyou.Ibelieveyoucanmakeit.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
[解析]
Dear Jeff,
I'm sorry to hear that you are addicted to short videos and lack interest in learning.I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.(写信目的)
Short videos do have some benefits.We can release pressure,share good times,cherish memories,etc.(肯定短视频在某些方面的好处)However,in my opinion,firstly,you should strike a balance between leisure activities and learning.Only on the premise of self﹣consciousness can we benefit from modern technologies rather than being slaves of such new technologies.【高分句型一】You should focus on study,and don't waste your time on distractions.Secondly,you can join your friends in playing various sports activities,which include running,cycling or playing basketball,etc.【高分句型二】(个人建议)
I hope my suggestions will be of some help for you.I believe you can make it.(表达祝愿)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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本题考查了"书信类,提纲作文,生活感悟,",属于"典型题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。