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DearMr．Jones，
I'maregularcustomerofyourrestaurant．I'mwritingtoexpressmymajordisappointmentinyourfoodandservicewhilediningtherewithmyfamilylastSaturdayevening．
Thedisastrousdinnerexperiencebeganwithourspottingacigaretteendinourfood．Whenweconfrontedthewaiteronthescene，wewerepromisedtobeservedanotherdish﹣afreshlymadeone．However，wehadeveryreasontodoubtwhetheritwassobecauseitwascoldwhenserved．Tomakemattersworse，thewaitersservedusinarathercoldandunfriendlymanner．Aftertheunpleasantmeal，Icamehomewithanupsetstomachandaruinedmood．
Irequestyoutokindlyinvestigateandtakeactionagainstthestaffondutyfortheirnegligenceandattitude．AndIdohopeyouwon'tletothercustomersdownasyoudidus!
Yours，
HuangXiaoming
[解析]
Dear Mr．Jones，
I'm a regular customer of your restaurant．I'm writing to express my major disappointment in your food and service while dining there with my family last Saturday evening．【高分句型一】（说明情况）
The disastrous dinner experience began with our spotting a cigarette end in our food．When we confronted the waiter on the scene，we were promised to be served another dish ﹣ a freshly made one．However，we had every reason to doubt whether it was so because it was cold when served．【高分句型二】To make matters worse，the waiters served us in a rather cold and unfriendly manner．After the unpleasant meal，I came home with an upset stomach and a ruined mood．（ 说明带来的影响）
I request you to kindly investigate and take action against the staff on duty for their negligence and attitude．And I do hope you won't let other customers down as you did us!（提出希望或解决方案）
Yours，
Huang Xiaoming
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